its really good
please update soon
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 10 May 2010 11:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Squeeee!
Snape is becoming "Harrified!" Hee hee!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
I'm so excited to see that Snape is starting to really care about Harry, and I love how he comforts Harry when he's sea-sick.
I can't wait for Snape to adopt Harry. I think that it's exactly what Harry needs in his life, and I think that taking care of Harry is good for Snape too.
I'm so anxious for the next chapter.
great story so far please update soon
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 10 May 2010 9:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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So Snape can adopt Harry? Super! They are so cute together! =O)
aww that was cute. I like how Snape is being such a dad, even if he THINKS he's acting...though I'm sure he really felt the way he acted at Harry's/Elliot's seasickness. Poor little fella.
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 10 May 2010 7:14 pm
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| Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed)
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slendid decriptions-loving Snape's humor
Yay! I look forward to your chapters so much. I remember sitting on my Grandad's knee while he my Grandma and my Aunt and Uncle played cribbage on the little wooden board. It's such a British past time and just paints the setting so well. Poor Harry, so much potential for pain, if the war should go badly. I look forward to the next part. Bent Broomsticks still under the bed, huh? =^_________^=
Author's Response: You know, I realised when I was writing this chapter that between my house and the cottage, we have fourteen different cribbage boards. :P And every time we show hesitation with quick math, the cribbage board is brought out....
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 10 May 2010 5:53 pm
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| Reviewer: LLALVA (Anonymous)
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Harry is so cute as a 6 year old!! Of course he wants to stay with Snape, And being together would help them both to stay alive. I look forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me
| 08 May 2010 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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I love this story! The changes in the relationship between Harry and Severus are wonderfully believable, and the descriptions of the locations and such make for a very vivid mental image when I'm reading it. I look forward to the rest of the tale! Well done!
| Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me
| 08 May 2010 9:29 am
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| Reviewer: star64742 (Signed)
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O my gosh I love this story... its so well written and addicting... I can't wait to find out what happens next... Please post more soon!!! thanks111
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