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Reviews For The Definition of Home
Author's Response: I like to be rather thorough in my research. ;) Almost all the places mentioned in the fic are real. And thanks for the review!
please update soon
I'm glad that Harry has those kinds of worries about his curfew and not wanting to anger Severus. It shows that he actually cares about what Severus thinks and feels. It really is a positive thing. It's a good thing that Severus figured out what was wrong with Harry so quickly and that he arranged it so that he could be in the room with Harry. It's curious that Harry had such an powerful reaction to the beesting without having been stung before and really rare. Harry really has the worst luck, doesn't he? Well...they have a little more information about what Tom did to those people. I wonder what they might find hidden in that cave? Great chapter!
Poor Harry, getting bee stung, and allergic on top of that. I'm glad Snape was there to take care of them. I don't know why, but I like the idea of Snape in muggle clothes. Makes him seem more human. And Harry became Elliot twice again. Hmm, interesting... I love how at home Harry is at Spinner's End, walking around barefoot and just generally being a normal kid at home. It's refreshing. I can see why he would want to stay. I thought Dumbledore borrowing Harry was amusing and Snape waiting up for him was so endearing. Just don't tell him I said that. ;-) Great job, as usual. As always, I am already looking forward to your next chapter! I'm so glad you're posting here! :D
Your story is very compelling. It just sucks me in and won't let go. I love the characters, the dialogue, the setting -- everything! Great job.
Severus' retribution for Lucius' taunting was humorous, as well as Harry's boyish admiration for Severus' upper body strength. Vernon is disgusting, especially with that calamite comment (by the way, Harry wasn't the only one who had to look it up!) The bee allergy and curfew worry was a nice touch and very enjoyable to read. Thanks for updating!
Oh and that little scene in the bar was hilarious. "Harry the Thud"! Too funny. Love this story. Molly seems to be approving of Severus taking Harry, doesn't she? Can't wait for the next chappie. |
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