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Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 1:24 am
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a wonderful chapter, I love the little details throughout the chapter that continually and subtly show the affection the boys are beginning to feel for each other. Very realistic and very touching.

    And I loved Severus' reaction to Dumbledore 'borrowing' Harry. His tune has definitely changed since the beginning of summer ^^ Molly was brilliant, I always do love her and you've written her very well - not too mushy like a lot of authors do.

    Punk!Harry was kinda funny to imagine, and what Severus did to Malfoy - that was brilliant, utterly brilliant.

    Will be awaiting the next update ^^
    Fabsx
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 12:06 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Send cluster of bees on Voldemort! =D
    Very nice chapter =o)
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 04 May 2010 10:56 pm
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    Shudder!! Bees.....horrid little stingy things!!
    Loving this story.
Title: Chapter 1 - A Sip in the Park 04 May 2010 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this and like their interaction!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 02 May 2010 9:35 am
Reviewer: stella008 (Signed) [Report This]
    i reallylove this story. it's seriously the highlight of my day. I've been stalking my own email every second day at the same time just to read your chapters. I love how you are just able to not manipulate any of the characters but yet it's not like JK Rowling's story anymore, it's yours. :)
    Are you a phsyciatrist? It seems like you are really good at evaluating minds. Sirius was always my favorite character, and I hate how most authors overlook him, but i honestly think you've got the true interperation of him. Thank you for these amazing updates. They are fast and full of great stuff.
    Btw, do you have your chapters pre-written or do you write them the day of?
    I'll be waiting to read the next part tomorrow. Great job :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review! :)

     I'm not a psychiatrist, actually, I'm not even a parent. I think when I become one I'll probably be a very strict one, hee. Thanks for the note on Sirius, I think he's much better suited as a big brother to Harry than a father figure.  As for the chapters, I have the whole story planned out, and I write the scenes a bit out of order. Then I string them all together. :)

Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 02 May 2010 5:19 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that Severus has definitely accepted that Harry is in his home to stay. He has, all unknowingly, become Harry's parent. I hope that nothing will happen to shatter the fragile peace their household has.

    Poor Harry! I understand perfectly his horror at Severus' sudden insistence on seeing to his sexual education. It's his own fault, of course, and I've a feeling that he will be far more careful in the future; if only to spare himself further humiliation and embarrassment. xD
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 02 May 2010 1:36 am
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *giggles* I like that. This was cute! I'm glad that Harry didn't have any nightmares though. I'm happy for him. And I love how Harry called him dad...and then called the house theirs...and then Snape thinking of the room as Harry's room...it was cute! Thank you! Give me more soon please?
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 01 May 2010 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    That first part was very amusing! Haha, I have this feeling that Snape talking about sex is something that many people don't want to hear. ;-)

    I love that Harry called Snape "Dad" and, if I'm correct, neither one of them even noticed. I'd wager that they didn't pick up on it after their days in Amsterdam. Harry was quite used to calling him that and Snape was used to hearing it. And then there was the distraction of the Malfoys.

    I love your portrayal of Snape's house. I'm writing a story and your version of Snape's house reminds me a lot of mine. I like it. I'm glad Harry likes it too and that he defended it. It's small, but very homey. :D

    I'm very curious about T.S. Eliot. It would seem that Snape admires the man quite a bit, for he's named his "son" Elliot and Harry overheard him quoting "The Hollow Men" a few chapters back. I've always thought Snape would be a well read man so this excites me. Can't wait to see where you take it. :D

    I love the relationship developing between Harry and Snape. You're doing such a great job with it.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 01 May 2010 11:22 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant. I love how Snape and Harry have settled naturally into a real relationship which feels very true to life. Snape is great: sarcastic, strict, but very human and Harry's embarrassment at the prospect of having to discuss sex with him was hilarious.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 01 May 2010 7:24 pm
Reviewer: orgwoman (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm...did either of them realize that 15 year old Harry called Snape "Dad?" I like the relationship in this story -- not too sappy, not too violent -- just right. :) Thanks for another interesting chapter. I'm impressed that your story is maintaining a very interesting plot as well as fun interactions between Snape and Harry. Good job!

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