| Title: Chapter 1 - A Sip in the Park
| 12 Feb 2016 3:26 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Ahhh! I'm so excited about this new story, (new to me at least!) Thanks for sharing your talent of writing with us!
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 13 Dec 2015 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: A. (Anonymous)
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I loved the story. I feel like I've read all the ones on ff.net and so I came here to see if I could find anything different. I'm glad I did because I enjoyed this one a lot. I think you wrote Harry and Snape perfectly. The only thing I'd change is that you made it sound like after the war Harry Potter will become Elliot Snape. I have no problem with a name change to Harry Snape, but (and I know you know this based on your writing) names have a huge impact on our identity and I think Harry wouldn't feel okay with changing his first name. When I started teaching I had such a hard time being called Ms...... No one has ever called me by my last name before. I think Elliot would still be a personal thing between Harry and Snape but I can't see Harry making it official. Not in the wizarding world anyway.
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 06 Jan 2014 12:25 am
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| Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed)
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aww ... you have no idea how much I enjoyed reading this story. It's absolutely perfect! The way Harry and Severus kept fighting at first, but still kind of in a less aggressive way than at Hogwarts and how it slowly changed into a deep care for each other.
That was so brilliant!
Definitely one of my most favourite Severitus stories. :)
| Title: Chapter 3 - Pins and Needles
| 05 Jan 2014 4:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed)
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Love this so much! Snape's sense of humour is just brilliant and matches my own so very well xD I was laughing my ass off throughout the whole chapter.
| Title: Chapter 6 - Connections and Progress
| 16 Aug 2013 6:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Estella (Anonymous)
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I work at a nature center and apart of my job deals with stinging nettle. Actually if u touch nettle, pet it,and rub it in anyway the burning stinging sensation will not occur in order for it to occur you have to brush up against it king of fast.
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 20 Nov 2012 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: kspence (Signed)
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That was a really good story, very believable, very enjoyable to read.
Great story. For second reading even better
Wonderful wonderful wonderful.
And that's all I have to say about that.
I don't do sweet...just honest.
I don't want this to end.
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