| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 26 Dec 2010 10:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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loved it the slow tranformation of the relationship was even better
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 02 Oct 2010 1:33 am
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| Reviewer: neodandy (Anonymous)
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Thank you for that lovely fic. Harry calling Snape Dad without thinking about it did feel strange, but the rest more than made up for any OOC moment. I like the way you expressed their respective feelings, and the tattoo was a surprising but nice touch.
Amazing story- I was in the mood for a good mentor!snape and this exceeded expectations! AND you had me bawling my eyes out (which everyone needs sometimes). Thanks for sharing. *off to start on sequel*
This story was really great. I enjoyed reading it.
Huzzah!
I love it. A very nice and enjoyable read and I look forward to reading the next one. Brilliantly writ - thank you!
Really like this chapter. Love the laundry service. LOL I have a fireplace that's plenty big... think I could get liberated house elves to wash my clothes? ^^
And I've been wanting to ask - why *do* Harry's socks never match?
Author's Response: Thanks for the note, I'm glad you're enjoying! You'll find out why Harry's socks never match in the second part of the story "The Definition of Family," there is actually a reason for it. :P
Poor guy. What a way to find out! At least he came to the right conclusion instead of jumping to the wrong one.
Poor kid - everyone's telling him to behave. ^^
Good chapie
"Just when he thought Snape was actually being nice and human"... ^^ I concur! Friends and relatives getting the waitstaff to sing for you on your birthday is evil! that's why I choose a Chinese restaurant for my birthday - they don't do the singing thing there! LOL
Great chapter.
Aw! Poor guy! Like the new definition, though. Very true, I would say. And seeing Snape being so gentle... ^^ I love it.
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