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Reviews For Vows III: Honour
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Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed!
This is not good. Poor Harry. But at least Severus has been training him for months, right? He's got a chance at coming out of the tournament unscathed. I simply love your descriptions; I felt like I was in the graveyard, at the church, and at Godric's Hollow, so vivid were your descriptions and so tangible were the descriptions of smell and taste. Well done. Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora! Yeah, I really like bringing in those types of descriptions as it makes the story more real for the reader, don't you think? Glad it worked! |
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