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Reviews For Vows III: Honour
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you've enjoyed it so far!
It's interesting that in your story you have moody and Snape actually being friendly to each other. Glad to see an update. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Ah yes, Moody. Nice twist, don't you think? I always thought those two secretly got along.
please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed!
This is not good. Poor Harry. But at least Severus has been training him for months, right? He's got a chance at coming out of the tournament unscathed. I simply love your descriptions; I felt like I was in the graveyard, at the church, and at Godric's Hollow, so vivid were your descriptions and so tangible were the descriptions of smell and taste. Well done. Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora! Yeah, I really like bringing in those types of descriptions as it makes the story more real for the reader, don't you think? Glad it worked!
It sounds like this is going to be a very interesting year indeed! Poor Harry; how horrible for him that Moody's lecture on the Unforgiveables brought back so many painful memories, that were best forgotten. I know that Severus will be there for Harry though, and help him deal with the trauma. I' m really glad that Sirius has accepted Snape and Harry's relationship and that Harry has his support. I'm worried though if something is going to happen at James' and Lily's graves. I'm also really intrigued about where your taking the story, and how it will differ from Canon. Great job as usual. I can't wait for the next chappie! :) |
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