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Title: Where is Home? 10 Apr 2012 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting beginning! I like your writing style; it flows well. I like your descriptions of Severus so far; I can completely imagine him being the kind of father who cares, but is super insecure and awkward. I got the feeling that he was waiting outside the room when Harry was born, and I really liked that detail. I can completely see that. I like that him giving up Harry actually makes good sense too, the way you've written it. As a Slytherin, the only way that Severus would give up his own flesh and blood is if he was mired in such self-doubt that he felt unable to care for the child himself. He would only do what he thought was best for his son.

    Anyhow, I like it! Excited to read more.
Title: Where is Home? 27 May 2010 12:50 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Good Start I look forward to the following chapters I also look forward to the Youtube vid...

    Author's Response:

    Heartstar,

    Thanks, glad to hear it. Just updated the next chapter, enjoy. Also a link to the video can now be found in the story notes, check it out.

    -Mel :)

Title: Where is Home? 27 May 2010 1:05 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, nice start Mel!


    I hope that Harry finds his father soon, and that Snape had a good reason for sending him away, but regrets it also.

    I was looking forward to seeing the banner to see what Harry looks like, but there is nothing there.

    Oh, and I can't wait to see the video on you tube. I hope you have it up soon.

    I'm looking forward to reading the first chappie soon too.

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thanks!! One will find the the other soon enough. Severus had a strong reason for sending away, however if he regrets it is yet to be seen. There is now a link to the banner in the story notes for those that can't see it and you'll find that the link to the youtube trailer is now there also, enjoy! Just updated the next chapter, thanks for your review!

    -Mel :)

Title: Where is Home? 27 May 2010 12:18 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    So far so good. This has so many ways you can take it. BTW, I'm afraid your banner didn't come out. Shows a broken link when I opened your story. So, since Harry isn't "THE BOY WHO LIVED" does that mean he gets to be the sidekick of Neville?

    Author's Response:

    alifromnm,

    Good. And true, there are so many ways. There is now a link to the banner in the story notes, check it out. And no, Neville isn't the boy-who-lived instead, I have modified the events and come up with a new plot involving the Death Eater and Lord Voldemort. More on that later ;).

    -Mel :)

Title: Where is Home? 26 May 2010 11:36 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting!

    Author's Response:

    little-sun,

    Glad to hear it.

    -Mel :)

Title: Where is Home? 26 May 2010 11:29 pm
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Start! Good plot, it's the first time any AU!Orphanage plot has had the potential of a good story, usually the writing is terrible and you seem to be pretty awesome. I will be looking forward to more ^^

    The picture in the banner is blank though... although that could be my computer's fault ^^

    Fabs

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. And wow, really? Thanks!! I love hearing that, your comments are certainly motivating. There is now a link to the picture for those that can't see the banner, check the story notes for it. Thanks for your review!

    -Mel :)

Title: Where is Home? 26 May 2010 10:54 pm
Reviewer: Hobbit_Me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oi! I'm excited! Your story's off to a great start :) and it's writen quite well. Good job! Can't wait to see more updates (but no rush ;P)

    Author's Response:

    Hobbit_me,

    Yay, thanks! Glad to hear it and thank you. Just updated the next chapter, enjoy.

    -Mel :)

Title: Where is Home? 26 May 2010 10:32 pm
Reviewer: Nekosune (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an interesting idea, I've read slightly similar stories before, but this one takes a new direction. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response:

    Nekosune,

    Thank you, glad to hear it. Just updated the next chapter, enjoy.

    -Mel :)

Title: Where is Home? 26 May 2010 10:25 pm
Reviewer: sevvy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hi!
    very good plot(but you don't say nothing about harry's physical appareance...I want to know!^-^)
    I hope you update very very soon!
    Ps is your fanfiction's profile down?

    Author's Response:

    Sevvy,

    Hey. Thanks. I have a banner in the story notes as well as a description of his appearance, have a look there. Just updated the next chapter, enjoy. And no, my fanfiction.net account is not down, why do you ask?

    -Mel :)

Title: Where is Home? 26 May 2010 10:15 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting take. Orphanage Harry aren't done very often. I'm completely hooked

    I do hope harry finds Severus, or the other way around, soon

    Author's Response:

    Hpfanficfan,

    Thanks. Really? And cool, :P. One will find the other soon enough.

    -Mel :)


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