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Title: Chapter 15: Lost and Found 07 Feb 2023 4:20 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Snape! He’s truly the best. The last part of the chapter was really touching. I love the roses, though had to look them up - so beautiful!
Title: Chapter 15: Lost and Found 07 Apr 2011 7:39 am
Reviewer: Sithtar (Signed) [Report This]
    Just found your fic and have been reading it steady. I read you A/N at the beginning so had to look up the original this one is based on. At this point I can clearly see how this one would turn into the original.

    I like the story and your writing, not sure if I'm going to read the original. Last year I would have without question, just not the mood I'm in at this time but that will change, I'm sure.

    Author's Response: First of all, thank you for reviewing Sithtar. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but this Sevitus version will never become the original story, which is in fact now two stories. Yes, the first installment follows Harry and Severus as they face their own personal demons. The second story addresses recovery from rape - both from the victim's perspective and his/her partner and the third is about rights and justice. But most of all, the trilogy is a love story. SHaria
Title: Chapter 15: Lost and Found 11 Aug 2010 12:37 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter! Harry certainly had a close call there. I knew that amulet would be helpful. Thank goodness that Severus was there to figure out something was wrong and to take care of Harry. And Neville too, in a way, because I doubt the Death Eaters would have just left him once he'd completed his task, and even if they had, Neville himself would have been completely destroyed at the knowledge that he'd hurt Harry.

    So Severus did good all around *grin*.

    I really love how he's growing closer and closer to Harry.

    Author's Response: And here again are events that have a means to an end (or at least a progression). This incident with Neville will effect both he and Severus. We witnessed Severus' already: he discovered a connection with Harry he never dreamed of and he also realized that perhaps he cares for Harry (platonically in this fic) more than he realized. As for Nevile, you'll have to wait and see. Thanks again for reviewing. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 15: Lost and Found 09 Aug 2010 5:58 am
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Sev is finally opening up to Harry and realizing that maybe there can be something more between them than just the civil conversations! I wondered when we'd be seeing more of their interaction and relationship moving along.

    I wonder if you might be able to post a link to your other version of this story? I'm very intrigues and would like to read it and see the differences, comparing the two. I just found this story and read it and would like to see the flip side of it as well. Possibly other people would too. Thanks!

    Author's Response:

    I am glad you are enjoying the story ForgottenEllipses. The Snarry version is finished and posted at HP Fandom under the original title, Eclipse of the Soul. I use the same penname.  I am currently posting the revised version of the sequel, which will remain nameless here. Thank you for sharing, SHaria

Title: Chapter 15: Lost and Found 07 Aug 2010 9:06 am
Reviewer: miissny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad Harry is ok, love the fact that Harry and Sev are getting closer. They have to be together.

    Author's Response: I totally agree miissny1.  I think of the relationship between Harry and Severus as sort of yin and yang. Where one is strong the other is weak, and visa versa and I will be working with this dynamic in this Sevitus version. Thanks for sharing. SHaria
Title: Chapter 15: Lost and Found 06 Aug 2010 8:28 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Severus does reach out to Harry. They would do each other a world of good, I think. I'm really glad that the timing of Voldemort's call for assistance allowed Severus to be in the right place at the right time to save Harry and help Neville and his grandmother.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing silverstargirl. Well, I kind of planned it that way- his being in the right place at the right time. We have a long journey ahead of us, so hang on for the ride. Hugs, SHaria

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