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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
I like the story and your writing, not sure if I'm going to read the original. Last year I would have without question, just not the mood I'm in at this time but that will change, I'm sure. Author's Response: First of all, thank you for reviewing Sithtar. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but this Sevitus version will never become the original story, which is in fact now two stories. Yes, the first installment follows Harry and Severus as they face their own personal demons. The second story addresses recovery from rape - both from the victim's perspective and his/her partner and the third is about rights and justice. But most of all, the trilogy is a love story. SHaria
So Severus did good all around *grin*. I really love how he's growing closer and closer to Harry. Author's Response: And here again are events that have a means to an end (or at least a progression). This incident with Neville will effect both he and Severus. We witnessed Severus' already: he discovered a connection with Harry he never dreamed of and he also realized that perhaps he cares for Harry (platonically in this fic) more than he realized. As for Nevile, you'll have to wait and see. Thanks again for reviewing. Hugs, SHaria
I wonder if you might be able to post a link to your other version of this story? I'm very intrigues and would like to read it and see the differences, comparing the two. I just found this story and read it and would like to see the flip side of it as well. Possibly other people would too. Thanks! Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the story ForgottenEllipses. The Snarry version is finished and posted at HP Fandom under the original title, Eclipse of the Soul. I use the same penname. I am currently posting the revised version of the sequel, which will remain nameless here. Thank you for sharing, SHaria
Author's Response: I totally agree miissny1. I think of the relationship between Harry and Severus as sort of yin and yang. Where one is strong the other is weak, and visa versa and I will be working with this dynamic in this Sevitus version. Thanks for sharing. SHaria
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing silverstargirl. Well, I kind of planned it that way- his being in the right place at the right time. We have a long journey ahead of us, so hang on for the ride. Hugs, SHaria |
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