Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 7:06 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. Hmm.... interesting end there. Intriguing, even. Hmm.

    Great story - I like it! Very nice dynamic between the two of them. Nicely written. Well done!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 6:43 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm... I'm going to have to think on that ending. I liked the story. I loved the dynamic between Snape and Harry and how it pretty much stayed the same as cannon, but they both came around to a mutual respect in their own ways.

    Good job.

    Author's Response: I wanted to write a stroy that was slightly less AU than the stuff I usually write. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 6:24 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was very interesting at the end there. It's too bad Harry didn't develop some potion that could have saved Severus from the snake at the end. But I'm so happy he married Hermione and they named their children SEverus and Lily and they ended up in Slytherin.

    I had to laugh though at the beginning, when Harry starts to study and realizes that he's actually learning something! It really DOES help if you read the material!

    I also was wondering if Harry ever ended up with Snape's potion book in sixth year and if he could then recognize whose it was because he'd worked so closely with the Professor?

    Sometimes it also helps if you work one on one with the teacher. It focuses you and I'm glad that Harry foudn the desire to learn so important. So many people don't, as I know because I taught many students who didn't care a bit about learning English. It's really frustrating as a teacher trying to teach students who just don't give a damn.

    Very good story!

    Author's Response:

    Somehow Snape surviving didn't seem right in this story. It was suppose to be more canon, even though it was Harmony and Harry's children end up in Slytherin.

    A lot of the other studens in my class were freaking out about exams and most of them never bothered to read the textbook. That might have helped a bit. :)THe Half Blood Prince book is an interesting question, maybe a good oneshot for the future.

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 1:29 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wait what It was harry or it was voldy, or sirius I am confused I love the endding buT i AM confused.

    Author's Response: Your review is confusing me a bit. The person Harry kept seeing was both himself and Severus. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I enjoy your review.
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 12:20 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this story. The H/Hr was nice - after all that work Harry would have understood a lot better where Hermione was coming from. Nice fic!

    Author's Response: I felt that Harry and Hermione would have bonded through all of their work together. Thanks very much for all your reviews!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 12:13 am
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa. Was not expecting that ending. Rather esoteric, considering the voice of the rest of the piece. But nice.

    It was a little confusing at the beginning as to whether Snape was alive or dead...

    I'm not as much a fan of Herm/Harry ships, but this one was played nicely.

    Nice story, overall!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, this chapter is a little shorter than it should be to explain everything that goes on.
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jul 2010 9:58 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good fic :) Though the ending was a bit confusing. I like the H/Hr relationship. Very cute :D But I don't think Harry would have quit Quidditch earlier on. But I guess you needed to do that for the story. Great job :)

    Author's Response: The ending is suppose to be slightly confusing. Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jul 2010 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! I've got chills! So...Snape was dead dead, and Harry was just seeing what he kinda wanted to be? He thought all the time that it was Snape, but it was really him? I've got CHILLS!!! And Harry's children were in Slytherin? I want to read all about this, but I can't because it's finished!! DX His children are Lily and Severus? That's cute!! I really like that a lot! But poor Snape is dead. :( Gone but not forgotten...Great work N_Forest!! :D

    Author's Response: That's how I thought about it. Harry wanted comfort of some kind and his mind creates it for him. I might write another story filling in all those years sometimes. Thanks for your reviews!
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jul 2010 4:06 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely ending to the story. I'm not sure I understood what the last line implied, but I like the mystery. :)

    (Another nitpick: "His greaving was over with." Grieving, I suppose?)

    All in all, it was a wonderful story. Well done!

    Author's Response: Great, the mystery is suppose to be there. And yes, I did mean Grieving. That you very much for your reviews!
Title: Chapter 3 02 Jul 2010 2:43 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Good ending; deep and emotional.

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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