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Reviews For Marks of Days Gone By
Great story - I like it! Very nice dynamic between the two of them. Nicely written. Well done! Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks very much for your review!
Good job. Author's Response: I wanted to write a stroy that was slightly less AU than the stuff I usually write. Thank you very much for your review!
I had to laugh though at the beginning, when Harry starts to study and realizes that he's actually learning something! It really DOES help if you read the material! I also was wondering if Harry ever ended up with Snape's potion book in sixth year and if he could then recognize whose it was because he'd worked so closely with the Professor? Sometimes it also helps if you work one on one with the teacher. It focuses you and I'm glad that Harry foudn the desire to learn so important. So many people don't, as I know because I taught many students who didn't care a bit about learning English. It's really frustrating as a teacher trying to teach students who just don't give a damn. Very good story! Author's Response: Somehow Snape surviving didn't seem right in this story. It was suppose to be more canon, even though it was Harmony and Harry's children end up in Slytherin. A lot of the other studens in my class were freaking out about exams and most of them never bothered to read the textbook. That might have helped a bit. :)THe Half Blood Prince book is an interesting question, maybe a good oneshot for the future. Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: Your review is confusing me a bit. The person Harry kept seeing was both himself and Severus. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I enjoy your review.
Author's Response: I felt that Harry and Hermione would have bonded through all of their work together. Thanks very much for all your reviews!
It was a little confusing at the beginning as to whether Snape was alive or dead... I'm not as much a fan of Herm/Harry ships, but this one was played nicely. Nice story, overall! Author's Response: Thank you very much, this chapter is a little shorter than it should be to explain everything that goes on.
Author's Response: The ending is suppose to be slightly confusing. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: That's how I thought about it. Harry wanted comfort of some kind and his mind creates it for him. I might write another story filling in all those years sometimes. Thanks for your reviews!
(Another nitpick: "His greaving was over with." Grieving, I suppose?) All in all, it was a wonderful story. Well done! Author's Response: Great, the mystery is suppose to be there. And yes, I did mean Grieving. That you very much for your reviews!
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