Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 3 04 Jul 2010 11:48 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this but not sure of the end did Snale live and harry die or was it harry's ghost going back? Great story thank you

    Author's Response: Snape died in Deathly Hallows, just like he did in canon. Harry died at the end too and the ghost was more of Harry's memories. Thanks for reveiwing!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 10:09 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed your story. It's nice to see Harry taking his studies seriously and working hard. I'm glad that he and Severus came to some accord in the end, and the ending was very mysterious.

    Great job!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 7:06 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. Hmm.... interesting end there. Intriguing, even. Hmm.

    Great story - I like it! Very nice dynamic between the two of them. Nicely written. Well done!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 6:43 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm... I'm going to have to think on that ending. I liked the story. I loved the dynamic between Snape and Harry and how it pretty much stayed the same as cannon, but they both came around to a mutual respect in their own ways.

    Good job.

    Author's Response: I wanted to write a stroy that was slightly less AU than the stuff I usually write. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 6:24 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was very interesting at the end there. It's too bad Harry didn't develop some potion that could have saved Severus from the snake at the end. But I'm so happy he married Hermione and they named their children SEverus and Lily and they ended up in Slytherin.

    I had to laugh though at the beginning, when Harry starts to study and realizes that he's actually learning something! It really DOES help if you read the material!

    I also was wondering if Harry ever ended up with Snape's potion book in sixth year and if he could then recognize whose it was because he'd worked so closely with the Professor?

    Sometimes it also helps if you work one on one with the teacher. It focuses you and I'm glad that Harry foudn the desire to learn so important. So many people don't, as I know because I taught many students who didn't care a bit about learning English. It's really frustrating as a teacher trying to teach students who just don't give a damn.

    Very good story!

    Author's Response:

    Somehow Snape surviving didn't seem right in this story. It was suppose to be more canon, even though it was Harmony and Harry's children end up in Slytherin.

    A lot of the other studens in my class were freaking out about exams and most of them never bothered to read the textbook. That might have helped a bit. :)THe Half Blood Prince book is an interesting question, maybe a good oneshot for the future.

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 1:29 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wait what It was harry or it was voldy, or sirius I am confused I love the endding buT i AM confused.

    Author's Response: Your review is confusing me a bit. The person Harry kept seeing was both himself and Severus. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I enjoy your review.
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 12:20 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this story. The H/Hr was nice - after all that work Harry would have understood a lot better where Hermione was coming from. Nice fic!

    Author's Response: I felt that Harry and Hermione would have bonded through all of their work together. Thanks very much for all your reviews!
Title: Chapter 2 03 Jul 2010 12:17 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked reading about the remedial potions. Harry's put in a lot of hard work, but it's paying off and I'm really pleased for him. It was pretty nice of Snape to go to all that trouble, too.

    Author's Response: People don't often seem to understand how much work teachers put into lessons and teaching. I personally could hardly believe Snape was being so nice. Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 1 03 Jul 2010 12:14 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed Harry's pleasure when he turned the test over and realised he knew the answers! His determination to do well is great (though he does realise he needs more than just Potions to be an auror, right?). I feel so sorry for him working so hard and getting bad grades, though he can't seriously expect Snape of all people would give him anything else. I'm enjoying this fic.

    Author's Response: It is a great feeling, I love the feeling of knowing the answers. I hope he realises he needs more than Potions. After all, it would be horrible to only get a NEWT is Potions. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3 03 Jul 2010 12:13 am
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa. Was not expecting that ending. Rather esoteric, considering the voice of the rest of the piece. But nice.

    It was a little confusing at the beginning as to whether Snape was alive or dead...

    I'm not as much a fan of Herm/Harry ships, but this one was played nicely.

    Nice story, overall!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, this chapter is a little shorter than it should be to explain everything that goes on.

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