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Title: Chapter I: Belle Notte e Solo Buio 19 Jul 2010 9:05 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome beginning! Compelling and so tantalizing. I hope that you will update soon and tell us what happened and what this all means. :) Great job so far!
Title: Chapter I: Belle Notte e Solo Buio 18 Jul 2010 2:14 am
Reviewer: Clari_Nevermore (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh. That was intense! And I have never read a more attractive description in my life, bravo! :) A swift update would be extremely welcome. *favorites*

    Author's Response:

    I know, I know!  I still get chills every time I re-read it, and I wrote it!  I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks it was intense.  It was intense writing it.

    I will plege to work my hardest on swift updates, but alas, RL tends to oft get in the way.  And I won't be releasing chapters until they reach a decent length (my goal is 3000 wpc), so my guess is updates will be kind of slow.  Particularly once school starts back up in a few weeks, I'm thinking probably once a month. **cringes from soaring rotten apples and tomatoes**  Don't hurt me!  Yes, kind of upsetting, but I'd rather go for quality than quantity for updates.

    Thank you for the review!

Title: Chapter I: Belle Notte e Solo Buio 17 Jul 2010 4:31 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really love this one. Very dark, and I do so enjoy the darkness. I am very excited to see where you are going to go with this one. Very well done.
Title: Chapter I: Belle Notte e Solo Buio 17 Jul 2010 12:23 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. Wow. I'm speechless. This is so incredibly well written and entrancing, I was so pulled into the story, I didn't realise that there's, well, there's no Snape. Or, if there is, he's not the focus of the story. At all. Nevertheless, I enjoyed this immensely, it's such a vivid imagery that at times it becomes a little overwhelming.

    Yeah, there goes speechlessness. Ha.

    Stunning and beautiful (in a very, very twisted sort of way) story!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for the speechlessness!  Or lack thereof. lol

    Snape is there, even in Chapter 1, although he is not named in this Chapter.  He will be having a very large part in the following chapters, including the next, in which you will figure out where he was in the first.

    Please keep reviewing!  Reviews are pure gold.

Title: Chapter I: Belle Notte e Solo Buio 16 Jul 2010 4:56 am
Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed) [Report This]
    I've said it before, but I'll gladly say it again: Great chapter! I'm sincerely astonished by the lack of response to this... Your story deserves better! I'm sure it'll pick up reviews soon, though.
Title: Chapter I: Belle Notte e Solo Buio 13 Jul 2010 4:43 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my God! Poor Harry.

    I'm dying to know if he had been under some sort of spell, to agree to take the Dark Mark.

    Beautifully written, and I'm anxious to read more.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, "poor Harry" indeed.  And it will only get worse, I will warn you.  Although I wasn't intending it be Horror genre when I came up with the idea, it took a dramatic turn on its own and now is definitely a very dark story.  Hopefully everyone will stay in for the long haul.

    Regrettably, you won't learn the answer to your question until the very end, which is a while in coming.  Be assured though, that all will eventually be made clear.

    An update is coming, just not for a while - the story's kind of slow in coming at this section.  I have many scenes already planned out word-for-word, but this next chapter is not one of those easy ones.  Oddly enough I tend to get my best inspirations while standing in line in the Dining Hall at college... Maybe that's why this is coming so hard, since I'm not there for the summer.

Title: Chapter I: Belle Notte e Solo Buio 13 Jul 2010 12:15 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! this is bloody brillant! you had me at the edge of my seat!

    HARRY A DEATH EATER?!?!? is it a dream? has Harry finally gone round the bend? is Voldy messing woth his head again? and where the H*LL is Snape when this was all going o?
    Please update soon! the suspence is Killing me!
    ~shannon

    P.s! gotta rate this a ten, but if i could it would be a 1,000,000!
Title: Chapter I: Belle Notte e Solo Buio 12 Jul 2010 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful use of imagery; your description of the scenery created a very vivid and clear depiction and I loved the onomatopoea, the sound of the rain smoothly linked Harry's transition from the comfortable world of sleep to grim reality. I also really liked your portrayal of Voldemort; the gentle, affectionate, almost sensual edge to his behaviour contrasted sharply with Harry's reaction, creating a real depth to the horror of the situation. A beautifully written piece, I'm really interested to see where you're going with this.

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