| Title: The Pitch
| 10 Jan 2018 10:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting start I loved how Severus kept saying "lemon drops"
| Title: The Pitch
| 31 Jul 2010 9:05 am
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| Reviewer: kazza (Anonymous)
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Oh, I love chapter one.
It's so lemon drop and fun too. ;)
OOh, I'm intrigued! I can't wait to find out what happens to Harry, and "whose" memories he has.
Awesome start! Loved the "lemon drop" part.
Author's Response: Thanks! There will be many more lemon drops before we're done.
"And what if my memory is full of lemon drops?" LOL!!!
I love it! I love it! A brilliant start! *does a happy dance* It's a good thing you're not anywhere close, because I could probably kiss you, I'm so thrilled!
I adore how things are "mismatched" - and the 'lemon drops', of course! ^^ Can't wait to see where you go next. Good use of Quidditch, too. Wonder why Harry took the dive?
Keep going - I'm totally psyched with this so far. Part of me kinda hopes it'll be a liiittle longer than 3-5 chapters, but even if it isn't, I just know I'm gonna love it!
Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for answering my challenge! ^_^
Author's Response: Well, you're welcome welcome welcome, lol. It just seemed like such a fun idea to write. And it will be short because the story will only deal with this particular ordeal, not anything after it's all over. I think you'll like the next chapter.
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