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Reviews For Nothingness
Title: Nothingness 14 Aug 2010 3:53 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhh! *sniffle*

    This was sooooo sad, but so goood!

    And as far as mistakes or typos, I proofread as part of my profession and I didn't notice anything. :)

    Very well done!

    Author's Response: I'm so relieved I it looks okay. Thank you for taking the time to read my first oneshot and making a review!
Title: Nothingness 13 Aug 2010 12:00 pm
Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice! Snape as "Sewi" - awesome! And I like that McGonagall, at least notices that not everything is fine for Severus.

    Author's Response: I don't have a one year old on hand at the moment so I was worried 'Sewi' would still be complicated for Harry. But I'm happy it seems to work out! And I like to think that McGonagall started a comraderie after this night. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Title: Nothingness 13 Aug 2010 3:31 am
Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed) [Report This]
    So sweet! I loved how you wrote Harry!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad I didn't do him any injustice! Thanks for the review!
Title: Nothingness 13 Aug 2010 3:07 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful oneshot; I absolutely loved your portrayal of Severus' grief, it was so heartbreakingly, starkly realistic, and your depiction of Lily longing was very poignant. Great job

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I do confess, I will always be frustrated with how Snape and Lily's friendship ends and then we never hear of anymore interaction afterwards. But on the other hand, I'm not fond of lovey-goo-goo romance between the two...so this in-between is what really floats my boat. Again, thank you for reviewing my first oneshot on P&S!
Title: Nothingness 13 Aug 2010 2:49 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    THE END?!?!?!? WHAT?!?!?!?! NO!!!!! Please continue this?? It has SUCH great potential for a longer story.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you see potential in it! I have been thinking of a follow up multi-chaptered bit to this oneshot...but alas, Little Patronus is still in the works as well and multi-tasking has never been my strong point! xD But thank you for reviewing my first oneshot! It means a lot!

Title: Nothingness 13 Aug 2010 1:20 am
Reviewer: Ray22 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Really sad.......
    But really sweet.......*tear*:)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I glad you enjoyed it! :)
Title: Nothingness 13 Aug 2010 12:31 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh That was so sad but beautifully writen god the can see the scene in my head as I read it. IS only it had happened that way in the stories there would have been I think less pain....

    Author's Response: I understand what you mean. But Snape is so complicated and full of pride, I think. I think he would've pretended what he saw never happened and just continue to live fullfilling a bitter promise. He's such a sad man...but I guess that's 85% reason why I like him! Thank you for the kind review! :)
Title: Nothingness 12 Aug 2010 11:27 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, awesome. Great one-shot. I absolutely adored it. Great look at what might have occurred between the two before Harry was sent to the Dursley's. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this. :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I feel like there should have been a connection between one year old Harry and Snape, both who just lost the most important woman in their lives. Thank you so much for reviewing!

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