This was powerful. I love how you take Harry’s feelings and actualize them.
I actually liked this. It's a unique look into a vengeful Harry - a Harry that I am surprised that didn't occur in the books. After all, Dumbledore was Harry's mentor and friend. I would say it is a bit short, but I'm guessing that this is a Work In Progress? Great work!
Wow! I'm glad Snape got away! This Harry sounds DANGEROUS! Really good contrast between the seemingly-predictable Snape, as illustrated by his practiced evening routine, and Harry's desire to be unpredictable. But look who has the last laugh! Nice job! :-)
Author's Response: lol. Thank you for your lovely review. :D. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it...and I'm glad Snape got away too. ;)
|