Nice story.
I wonder how she testified under Veritaserum when she knew it was not truth.
Author's Response: There are two possibilities (I had never fully made up my mind on the issue): 1) She didn't take the potion and it was a lie the papers wrote, or 2) Just like in a lie detector test, if you believe something enough, or tell yourself it's true, you pass.
Thank you for your wonderful portrayal of Harry and Severus. Everything about this story spoke of Harry's strength of character, something he must have inherited from his father.
I honestly have no idea why I clicked on this story, because it certainly didn't seem like my cup of tea. But I'm so glad that I did, because it turns out that I absolutely, 100%, fully and thoroughly enjoyed it every step of the way. I'm actually pretty sad now that its over, but I can understand not wanting to continue adding on to it forever, lol.
Excellent job with this story! What a joy it was to read. =)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Have you read all my others? I try to keep most of them pretty intense like this one all the way through.
the scripture flowed very well with the story. and being a christian is nothing to be ashamed of..this is a very good story!
Author's Response: Haha, not ashamed, just tired of getting hate mail online for it :)
| Title: Redemption
| 22 Jun 2011 4:27 am
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| Reviewer: Sierra (Anonymous)
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Interessting, sad and nice.
Interesstin, sad and nice.
This is good and I'm glad you are a Christian. I'm a Christian too but not many people say anything on here. I go to a Pentacostal church sometimes but lately there is so much drama that there isn't any learning and I feel bad going. I do want you to know that I absolutely do not like when you leave stuff up to the imagination. It just drives me insane! Lol this is a really good story and I love it.
Peace!
CheyRain
Great! I'm glad Draco gained the courage. It seems like everything is back on track!
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