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Reviews For The Forgotten Child
Author's Response: Thanks. The poison still would have made Jack ill, because he had been recently exposed to magic, but being magicl himself only made it worse. Some of his magic was also disguised as Harry's, which was why many didn't notice it was actually Jack's. Thanks for the review.
I really liked how Severus explained about why Harry's hiding the letter had caused upset. And I liked it when he hugged Harry and forgave him. Of course Harry would be over the moon, hearing the good news that Jack would accompany him to Hogwarts! :-D The two of them are going to be quite a pair, and I'm sure they're going to cause a lot of mischief along the way! Well done! Author's Response: I'm not a big fan of Jack's parents either. And yes, the boys will be getting into quite a lot of mischief at Hogwarts. Thanks you very much for your review, I enjoyed reading your comments and hearing what you thought.
Author's Response: Thanks. And actually, not only magical children could get sick from the poison. Any child, even if they're purely muggles, could have gotten sick if they were recently exposed to magic. Jack had been exposed to Harry's magic just before he'd had the poison, and being magical himself only made the sickness worse. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks :P. Jack's family didn't put up as much resistance mostly because their mind was only occupied with Jack's brother Michael. They would have had some suspicion of Jack being different, but in the last number of years they weren't paying as much attention, but yes your comments are on the right track too. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you were surprised. Most of Jack's magic was disguised as Harry's. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thank for your review.
And I especially loved that last scene where Harry reverts to this past apellation for his father. It was really sweet to see such a bonding moment between father and son. Plus, the fact that he would have spilled all to Severud had he asked says a lot about how highly Harry thinks of him. Please update again soon, I'm really looking forward to reading more! Author's Response: I wasn't aware that the notifications weren't working, maybe I should get it checked out. Thanks for letting me know. Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I think that will keep happening from time to time. And yes, your comments are very accurate. I will be updating again in a day or so, I'm glad you're looking forward to more. Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: Thanks. And yes when they go shopping it will be quite interesting. I'm glad you think so, and thanks for the review.
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