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Reviews For The Forgotten Child
Author's Response: Yeah? I'm glad you like the characters themelves, however, in for their names and the reasoning behind their selections: please see the edited end author's notes of chapter 20. Thanks!
I also like the way you've already started molding these characters and making them seem so three dimensional in such a short time. I'm already very intriguied by Casey. I wonder what his background is. At first I thought he was another Malfoy, classic blonde hair and skepticism for Muggles, but perhaps it is not quite so. And I wonder what Logan's and Conner's problems are! I mean really, talk about a bad first impression. I look forward to getting to know each of these new characters. Haylee seems very sweet and for some reason, I imagine Oscar will be a more comedic character. Hey, was the Casey the son of those strange people you once mentioned in a chapter? As for the sorting, my personal preference would be towards Slytherin not just because it is Severus's house but also because Harry had to fight for survival for a part of his childhood. I feel that Gryffindor doesn't seem to fit him very well because he's not exactly a loud running head first into a situation type of boy. Anyways, I look forward to reading more about the Sorting. Also, is Severus going to be there for Harry's sorting. I thought that since he's going to be a professor there (one can assume), he would show up. I'm so glad to hear that the wait won't be too long for the next chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more! :) |
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