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Reviews For The Forgotten Child
Author's Response: An interesting comment, though I have already made my decision regarding Jack and am already up to writing Harry at Hogwarts. However, I do think you will like how I have planned things out. Thanks for the review.
BTW, I'm not sure what's wrong but your story doesn't show that it's updated. Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Jack has sort of become a family member in his own way. And sadly, his parents aren't going to get much nicer yet. The issue with the story not showing as updated has been fixed. I have written ahead, so I will be updating the story again in a few days. Thanks for your review!
You said that Cody doesn't want to ask his father about the mark on the tre but he already did that in a previous chapter, didn't he ? I hope the next chapter will be updated soon!
This was a cute chapter. Update again soon please! Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that! :D As for the "daddy", yes Harry does deem himself too old for that at 11, however it will resurface from time to time when it is needed. A lot of the more sad or "needing his father" moments will bring about the term. Much to Severus' dislike, of course, as he no doubt feels he is finally freed from the term :P I am up to writing chapter 20, I will be updating again in a couple more days. Thank you for your review.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. Michael will appear again, though not for quite a while. Haha, I liked your comments and thanks for the review.
This was such a lovely chapter. I really enjoyed reading this, especially the interactions between Severus and Erin. I'm sure they could turn out to be great friends, maybe even as close as brother/ sister. Harry's gotten really lucky so far! I really can't wait for more. I'm especially looking forward to seeing more family time, Sev/Harry/Erin interactions. Thanks for the quick update and hope to read more soon! Author's Response: I'm glad you like Harry's room, and yes he does deserve it. I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter, and it is my intention for Severus and Erin to be more brother/sister than anything. They will reach that point of closeness, but not quite yet. More family time should be ahead as well, and I will be updating again when I can. I am already up to chapter 20, so the wait won't be too long. Thank you very much for your review! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm become fond of Erin too. Haha, yeah exactly - Severus knows it too. Giving Harry his surname would not be a good idea for the kid's future at Hogwarts and beyond. Life at Hogwarts for Harry is going to be very different from the books. I've got my own plots arranged, and things will be quite interesting from the very beginning. Thanks, and thank you for your review!
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear your comments, and I assure you I will either be updating later tonight (so in like 6 - 8 hours), or tomorrow. Thanks for the review. |
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