The Great Wall of China isn't really a wall, lols...but I think you know that? It's a long stretch of uneven stairs, and you can't actually stand on the wall or you'll fall to your death.
Love the story though, I hope Erin would make an appearance soon so that we get to find out who SHE really is. Severus probably knows her anyway. But is it too much to hope for the three of them to live happily ever after together?
Author's Response: Haha, yeah I know about the Great Wall of China, however these two 7 years olds don't, as they've only seen pictures and know what it's called ;). Erin will be making appearances here and there but a more solid one soon. More details about her and her life will be revealed in decent time, especially with Severus now looking into who she is as well. And we all know how Severus is good at getting the information he needs, of course...that depends on his motivation and such. And no, it's not too much to hope for the three of them to be a happy family, however as I haven't written that far ahead yet even I don't know the main details with that yet. Thanks so much for your review and comments! :D
I LOVE THE NEW CHAPTER!
Please update soon, I love the way you are portraying Severus, and Harry, and I am so glad that Harry has found this great friend in Jack, it is heartwarming.
I'll keep my eyes open for an update :)
I love this story so far! Please update soon, I'm looking forward to reading more!
Aww! That was the best chapter so far!
Yay, finally some breakthrough!
Aww the last part was especially cute!
Poor Harry...I hope Snape saves him soon!
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