I loved that a Chastity ward! *LMAO* oh please tell me you will be update soon! (When you can ) please!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 18 Jan 2011 6:15 am
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| Reviewer: Svarra (Anonymous)
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Ha! Called it. Though I can't actually find the review anymore where I called it, but whatever.
Hmm, it seems that the greater the depth of feeling, the more is forgotten. Also, that it only occurs when there is a long enough period without contact with Harry, probably so he wouldn't notice how someone knew him one day and forgot him the next.
Oh! Now we are getting down to what's going on. Thanks for the update!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 18 Jan 2011 12:13 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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AH! I"m so glad you updated this! Chastity ward! HAHA
I adore this fic! Your Harry is so endearing, and your Snape is wonderful. The end of this chapter made me break into a huge smile.
To answer your question, I definitely don't think you've overdone it with the romance. ACTUALLY... I'd love to see some more romance! Harry deserves a decent guy who will love him and make him happy. :)
Love! hahaha Love it! haha! oh my. Yay I'm happy for the update, made my week. Thank you. (and erm, I don't think the relationship part is big deal, but it doesn't hurt the story either way. :)
I'm LOVING this fic. It's interesting and original. Keep up the good work!
Guess what?! We're only a week away from January 15th. That means there will be another chapter soon, right? Right? :D
This story.
I really really like it.
Two specific thoughts:
a) you capture the whatever of Harry not being able to eat really, really well (i.e, I can identify with it)
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b) What on earth is mushroom pie?
| Title: Chapter 9
| 16 Dec 2010 4:35 am
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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I love the relationship that is growing between Harry and Snape. Harry is coming into his own slowly but surely. I also like the way Snape handled the Charlie incident. Charlie is an adult (young and stupid) but an adult and he took advantage of a child. I think Snape or Derek should rip him a new one for what he did and more for how he handled it - or didn't. Love your work.
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