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Reviews For Unexpected Child
Title: Chapter 02 09 Feb 2008 5:42 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'VE BEEN WAITING FOUR YEARS FOR YOU TO UPDATE THIS STORY!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE DO SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    GREAT WORK SO FAR THOUGH
Title: Chapter 02 16 Nov 2007 2:08 am
Reviewer: Sasulia (Signed) [Report This]
    oh wow really good, just little americanisms really, like the fact that the police force rarely carry guns in england, and the ER is called A&E short for accident and emergency.

    normally i wouldn't write this, but i'm trying to stop using my britishisms when writig a fic with an american setting, and i know it helps when people point them out to me.

    i really do love this story though, especially the original twist on it, and i'm a sucker for babies.

    i'm a student midwife, and here in england and the rest of britain, it's the midwives who look after the pregnant women, deliver the majority of the babies unless there's something really wrong with mother and baby, and we also look after them after the delivery. because of this it seemed really weird to me that the nurse knew about labour, because our nurses don't deal with it. it took me a while to realise that there are very few qualified midwives in america lol, it really did confuse me.

    there are also no or almost no communal nurseries anymore, the babies always stay with their mothers unless there's a problem like the mother is a convited criminal. wow i don't think i've ever rambled this long on a review before, it's probably the fact that it's just gone midnight and i've been up since six. also i find the differences between different countries' medical services interesting. i've read stories where the dursleys have refused to let harry see a doctor because they didn't want to pay for it, when actually almost all medical treatment, including seeing a doctor is free.

    wouldn't be surprised at all if you skipped this or fell asleep from boredom after the first line, really.

    anyway, 10 points for this and it's being added to my favourites. i don't think i've ever done this before on a fic with only two chapters. update soon, really looking forward to it!
Title: Chapter 02 07 Nov 2007 6:51 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! < *big grin*

    Please, please don't abandon this story! D:
Title: Chapter 01 07 Nov 2007 6:42 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. My. God.

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    I love it already!
Title: Chapter 02 02 Sep 2006 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Luna Moonlight Fawn (Anonymous) [Report This]

    A great story I really like it:) Keep up the great work and update as soon as you possibly can:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:)

    Bye for now:)

Title: Chapter 01 19 Aug 2006 10:55 pm
Reviewer: LadyNiteRaven (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE update this story!!! I love it!
Title: Chapter 02 15 May 2006 6:11 am
Reviewer: your fan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i very much look foreward to reading more about your unexpected child.  hope you had a nice weekend :O)  your fan
Title: Chapter 02 13 May 2006 9:41 pm
Reviewer: gommeke (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved reading these first 2 chapters, I hope you'll write more soon.
Title: Chapter 02 23 Nov 2005 10:17 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    Please, you have to continue this!  How ever not the thing to read when you have sore ribs.  There are several bust a gut lines in here.  I look forward to reading more. 
Title: Chapter 02 11 Nov 2005 2:31 pm
Reviewer: JE aka Yessina (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I really love the beginning of the story... and I still love it years after I first read it, but I'm wondering when I can read more...

     

    Please update soon as I want to see how Sev reacts to the news...


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