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Reviews For Simple Wisps of Snow
Author's Response: I know and I was so intent on writing a lighter chapter. But again, my fingers ran away without the head!! Cool thanks for the input and review :)
Good chapter, though. sort of melancholy and perhaps a little tense. We're all waiting for the next shoe to drop, good or bad. :) Author's Response: Daphne and Neville is also an option def and I could see her going either way, hmm I'll have to think about it. As fir Draco, don't worry, he'll be ceiling up very soon :D Yeah, it was sad, and I really wanted to write a lighter one. Alas my hand ran away with my and so we'll have to wait for the next chapter, :)
Good chapter. Thanks for posting. Author's Response: I definitely agree that Hermione is out of character, more so than Ron, but if you think of her actions in just a tad more of the extreme, her control issues and drive at being the best, well it could be believable :) But like I hinted, perhaps they arent all themselves ;) Thanks a million for the feedback :D
Author's Response: Thanks a million for the review :) And yeah Voldy such pain in the arse XD
Author's Response: Thanks a million for the review :)
Author's Response: Thanks A million for the review :)
Author's Response: I see your point definitely. They are way OCC, but for this fic, I wanted them totally off the wall just to experiment :) I can see how it's unrealistic though I think I need a beta :) my mind tends to run away with me a bit. Thanks mill for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I promise though it will get better for him pretty soon :)
Author's Response: I know, :( It'll get better soon. Thanks for the review. I'm working on the next chapter now :)
Author's Response: Thanks a million for your review, making it the 30th. Such a special number :) Anyway I'm glad you liked it and I've literally uploaded the next chapter. Hope it doesnt disappoint as I kinda got carried away with it. Ah well XD
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