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Reviews For Simple Wisps of Snow
Author's Response: Thanks a million for the review. Glad you liked it :)
* Less descriptions of pretty colors * More plot Author's Response: Thank you, I will definitely take this into account in my next chapter. All I can say is that I was prepared to continue this story, and so made up for it with too much descriptive paragraphs. Definitely the next chapter will be more progressive. Thanks for the review :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm in the progress of writing the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks a million for the review. I'm glad you liked it :)
I like how he tells Severus to back off until the trust between them is built up and he is ready to talk and Severus agrees to it. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks a million for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Busy weekend but hopefully I'll have the next chapter hopefully on mon :) Thanks again for the review :D
Author's Response: Thanks a mill. Update should be up pretty soon :) Author's Response: Thanks a mill. Update should be up pretty soon :)
I wonder how this will go on.... Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) you'll just have to tune in for the next chapter ;)
Author's Response: Thanks. Next update should be pretty soon:)
Author's Response: Just have. Though I'm not too happy with the chapter. Enjoy :) |
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