Lovely first chapter Lan! I love Angel! And I love how Orin baked cookies with the kids!
One to ch.2!
Author's Response: Thanks, SW.
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| 26 Dec 2010 7:37 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Well, I would have done the same impulsive rush out into the snow to help the poor deer, so I can't really fault little Angel's motives! What DID happen to the deer, after she lost consciousness? // Very cute baking scene, tho' I cringed at the flour throwing. (Since I'm a mere Muggle, I'd have to clean up the mess the HARD way!) // Wonderful start to your story, Lady! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks, Shadow. I likely would have done the same too. :D
Oh Angel, you naughty little imp.
I'm glad that she's okay though.
Great start Lady. Off to the next chappie.
Happy holidays
Author's Response: Happy Holidays to you, too, Pandora. :D Thanks for the review.
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