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Title: Chapter 1 22 Jul 2011 8:26 am
Reviewer: imogene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey. This chap is great.
Title: Chapter 1 26 Jun 2011 5:57 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    im beginning to love this fic!
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jun 2011 3:39 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally got around to starting in on this and I must say I'm certainly satisfied with this first chapter. Great start - I really look forward to seeing where you went with this.
Title: Chapter 1 13 May 2011 5:09 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't understand why Remus is so lacking in emotion toward the way the Dursleys treat Harry. He almost has this, "Oh well, that's just the way things are" attitude about it all. I would think he'd be angry and do anything but leave Harry alone to deal with them.
Title: Chapter 1 05 Feb 2011 9:43 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I love this. Remus is such a great character here. And Harry is very much in character too. Very canon. Good job!
Title: Chapter 1 12 Jan 2011 2:40 am
Reviewer: Clari_Nevermore (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun dun! A very good first chapter, and I like where you're going with this. Hope to see more!

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: Chapter 1 11 Jan 2011 5:12 am
Reviewer: channeling_snape (Signed) [Report This]
    I can make no sense of your title.

    Taking it term by term:

    Victus: living / way of life / diet, food, provision
    Per:
    1.per (+ acc.)  (of space)
    2.per (+ acc.)  (means/instrument)
    3.per (+ acc.)  (cause)
    4.per (+ acc.)  (of time)
    Reproba: second-person singular present active imperative of reprobo
    => reprobo: disapprove/reject/condemn
    Monumentum: memorial or token of remembrance, remembrance

    My way of life is caused by your condemnation of my rembembrance?
    My way of life will cause your rejection of a memorial?

    Please add an author's note with your intended translation of this phrase.

    Author's Response:

    Wow...a review on just my title alone.  I never thought I'd ever see that.  Glad I ditched having Latin chapter titles.  I can only imagine what my reviews would be. LOL 

    The site I used to translate Latin to English gave me the words to my title.

    Victus - living

    Reproba - false

    Monumentum - rememberance

    I'm not good at coming up with titles so I really wanted to translate it to Latin so it would sound better.  It was something like Living with False Memories.

Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 11:53 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start to the story I hope Severus appears soon

    Author's Response: Thanks.  Severus will be along shortly. =)
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 10:07 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely first Chapter! Im Glad it was Remus who came to get Harry. I know that they both need each other to help one another deal with Sirius' death.

    Looking foward to seeing where you take us with this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 8:43 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmm interesting I hope to see more soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks.

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