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Title: Chapter 2 16 Jan 2011 4:45 am
Reviewer: EchoingWhispers (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful story! i can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying my story so far.  I hope you continue to enjoy as the story goes on.
Title: Chapter 2 16 Jan 2011 12:25 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    oh Poor Harry
Title: Chapter 2 15 Jan 2011 10:38 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I feel so badly for Harry. He's rescued from the Dursleys, but only to go to Grimmauld Place which is so painful emotionally for him now.

    Severus and Remus both need a swift kick in the seat of the pants for their behavior here; Remus because he should have known how painful it would be for Harry to suddenly be back at Grimmauld Place, and Severus because he's just being a cruel git.

    This is no criticism of your writing though, because they are both perfectly in-character. Severus is a cruel git right now (though I hope he'll warm up to Harry eventually) and Remus, for all his intelligence, can be very dim-witted when it comes to emotional needs-deliberately so, I think. I really want to shake him and the other Order members too. For all that Harry is so crucial to the war, his emotional and psychological well-being does not seem to be high on the priority list.

    Well, anyway, I really enjoyed the chapter and am looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I'm glad you think everyone seems to be in-character.  That was my number one requirement while writing this.
Title: Chapter 2 15 Jan 2011 6:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. I forgot how cruel Snape can actually be.

    The poor boy does not need to be in that house!

    Great chappie firefly!

    Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Title: Chapter 1 12 Jan 2011 2:40 am
Reviewer: Clari_Nevermore (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun dun! A very good first chapter, and I like where you're going with this. Hope to see more!

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: Chapter 1 11 Jan 2011 5:12 am
Reviewer: channeling_snape (Signed) [Report This]
    I can make no sense of your title.

    Taking it term by term:

    Victus: living / way of life / diet, food, provision
    Per:
    1.per (+ acc.)  (of space)
    2.per (+ acc.)  (means/instrument)
    3.per (+ acc.)  (cause)
    4.per (+ acc.)  (of time)
    Reproba: second-person singular present active imperative of reprobo
    => reprobo: disapprove/reject/condemn
    Monumentum: memorial or token of remembrance, remembrance

    My way of life is caused by your condemnation of my rembembrance?
    My way of life will cause your rejection of a memorial?

    Please add an author's note with your intended translation of this phrase.

    Author's Response:

    Wow...a review on just my title alone.  I never thought I'd ever see that.  Glad I ditched having Latin chapter titles.  I can only imagine what my reviews would be. LOL 

    The site I used to translate Latin to English gave me the words to my title.

    Victus - living

    Reproba - false

    Monumentum - rememberance

    I'm not good at coming up with titles so I really wanted to translate it to Latin so it would sound better.  It was something like Living with False Memories.

Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 11:53 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start to the story I hope Severus appears soon

    Author's Response: Thanks.  Severus will be along shortly. =)
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 10:07 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely first Chapter! Im Glad it was Remus who came to get Harry. I know that they both need each other to help one another deal with Sirius' death.

    Looking foward to seeing where you take us with this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 8:43 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmm interesting I hope to see more soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 1:33 am
Reviewer: silvermoonfae (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it, well done. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! =)

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