Wow, I really enjoyed this fic not just because it was so well written and had a sense of strength yet vulnerability to it, but also because while reading I could paint the entire scene in my mind, and I could feel that Harry is lost, trying to find his direction. And I could feel what Snape does about his habits. I like how he interacts with Harry, Sam and Potter.
Overall, I loved that Snape was in a cafe through habit and Harry joins him, having crossed paths during a moment when they expected to be entirely in their own world.
This is a great one-shot and I really enjoyed it. I would read it again and again. Thank for you sharing it!
| Title: Augury
| 10 Feb 2012 8:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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It made feel a sense of loss and futility thank you so much for a great story
I like it, but I feel like some of the language doesn't fit Snape very well.
This story was a pleasant change. There was a lot of emotion here portrayed in a different way than stories on P and S normally are. Great job!
Very well written and thought-provoking!
| Title: Augury
| 14 Jul 2011 9:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Helene (Anonymous)
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I like this. I think I will have to come back and read it again and again.
Somehow I ended it with a sense of hope that people can change despite themselves. Maybe because Snape wants to change if only to see Harry not lose the part of him that is Sam.
Really good job. Its well written, well thought out, and introspective. Definitely one of my favorite one shots.
Your story is interesting, twisted, and rather AU, but I like it. It's like watching the new "Alice in Wonderland;" you know it's a good movie, with plot twists and underlying meanings, but it confuses the hell out of you some of the time.
| Title: Augury
| 28 Mar 2011 2:15 am
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| Reviewer: Rise (Anonymous)
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This was a rather interesting read. Seems full of mismatched words, confusing and making sense at the same time.
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