"You still look like Potter to me." Severus grunted.
Haaaa! Loved that.
This was really just brilliant. I loved it! Totally a favourite now. I even got tears in my eyes at some points. The semi-understanding that Harry and Snape came to was so lovely, yet fragile.
I got shivers when Snape almost desperately tried to get Harry to accept what "Sam" had said.
All in all, this was very well done. Can't believe it took me this long to read it! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you SO MUCH, Victory! You made me smile and blush at the same time! :)
Wow! That's all I can say. Wow! Words will not form in my mind at all.
This was amazing. Finally Severus saw Harry for who he truly is.
| Title: Augury
| 02 Mar 2011 6:12 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow of Flame (Anonymous)
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Wow... that's good. Slightly confusing, but good. I liked the interaction betwenen Sam and Snape, and then between Harry and Snape. It seems like Sam is anohter aspect of his personality.. so does he have MPD or something.. or was he just trying to be someone else?
IT made me want to cry for some odd reason. I'm not sure that that is a normal reaction to your story, but I just felt so heart broken for Harry. I wanted Sam to stay. I wanted Harry to not have to worry about it. And then the idea of Harry dropping the basin - well, I don't think that Harry will be able to hold onto the basin if he's thinking about dropping it all the time.
I like your story BTW - amazingly written and interesting.
| Title: Augury
| 06 Feb 2011 12:45 am
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| Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous)
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I like it:) In fact, I really don't know what I am supposed to think about it, but I know I will remember this one-shot for years.
Umm, I don't know English very well, so I'm sorry for my errors:)
very nice.
it made me feel... empathetic. confused, just like harry. frustrated, just like snape.
| Title: Augury
| 19 Jan 2011 5:28 pm
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| Reviewer: fictionfan (Anonymous)
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Wow, very esoteric (I think, therefore I am) and not the usual fare here a P&S. I like it and don't think it would make a long story chapter and verse. More of a odd vignette kind of thing.
Brava
| Title: Augury
| 15 Jan 2011 10:11 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Great story... wow, can I relate! I think I'll be Sam for a while ;)
I have a feeling I kinda love stories with a Harry that has multiple personalities...it just seems fascinating and kinda natural to assume so
Good story! :D
Oh my, that was beautiful and inspiring but also haunting and sad. I feel so much for the both of them. You did an excellent job with this story and I am feeling very emotional right now as I am typing trying to put into words what I am feeling. I am so glad you wrote this as I too loved the whole train thing in HBP and Harry's response to Dumbledore of "I like riding trains" - you took this one step further and gave it so much life. I am not expressing myself that great right now but I wanted to leave a review as I think you shared something really special here. Thanks for sharing your words.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for not only reading but reviewing as well! It really makes me feel so good knowing that I've written something that people can enjoy. :)
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