This is a great story, even if heartbreaking. I feel pulled into the hopeless depths with Harry, as he feels a palpable rejection and scorn. Hopefully there is light ahead.
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| 25 Apr 2011 4:00 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry! He finds out that his father is Severus Snape and not James Potter, Severus hates him, and his friends abandon him because of something beyond his control. I can imagine Ron doing this, but not Hermione. I'm glad that Lucius was there for Harry. I can't wait to read more.
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| 08 Mar 2011 8:54 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Ron is a jack***, Harry shouldn't be his friend. What about Ginny and the rest of the Weasley's?
Omg! That's just too tragic. I can't believe that Lucius is being nice to him. Nice change though, having a decent Lucius.
I really hope that Snape comes around though. Harry can't handle much more.
Great chappie
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| 04 Feb 2011 3:46 pm
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| Reviewer: lex (Anonymous)
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I'm not sure I get whey Ron is so mad at Harry, or why Lucius is being nice given his historical dislike of Harry.
Maybe some background on Malfoy and his motives (good or bad) would clarify this? Alternate characterizations are enjoyable (I like Lucius as a secret good guy), but to pull them off effectively, it's helpful to give the reader a reason to move beyond the original characterizations as developed by JKR.
Hope that makes sense - and it's just con crit. Nothing bad. :)
ARGH! Snape is so... SO NASTY! How can he be so cruel? And though it's nice, I"m still wondering how Lucius can be so... nice? Is there an ultimate motive behind his actions?? I hate Harry being so sad, and i absolutely adore the way you can turn Ron (how could you!!!) against Harry, and then manipulate the whole situation with a few simple sentence yet picturing perfectly Harry's sad state... Fantastic. Really really fantastic.
its really good
i love your story
cant wait for the next chapetr please update soon :D
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| 03 Feb 2011 6:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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Why is Ron being such a (male genitals)? Though, even in canon this would not be so out of character for him. I am glad to see that Lucius is not as nasty as he could have been, though someone like him would have a keen sense of reciprocal obligations. I would agree with Harry that he probably had a "come to Jesus" with Draco out of earshot, and good thing too. I want to find out why Snape is being so awful too. Write more soon.
Oh this chapter brought tears to my eyes!
Please update soon I can not wait!!!!!
- Ash
Uh oh. Snape is such a knot-head. Great beginning. Great emotions in this one. Can't wait for more.
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