I love your story. Was incredibly grateful that the update from the last chapter came so swiftly. The way you portray Harry feeling is just so realistic and clear. And on a side-note, both the 'mood song' and quotes fit really well.
Anyway, it is stories like this one that keep me reading fanfiction. Great story.
| Title: Immune
| 04 Feb 2011 5:07 am
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Sweet and full of angst simulataneously. I love the humanity that the Malfoys showed Harry; it's just too sad that others couldn't see that Harry was still Harry regardless of his parentage. I hoping for a happily-ever-after for the two Snapes and a little "look at me now" revenge for Harry by the time the next school year begins. This is a different lovely story. Thanks
"There had been no funeral or memorial service, nor had there been any mourners."
This is the worst condemnation a person can receive. Bravo for Severus realizing it and deciding to do something before the same could be said of him.
This story has really caught me. Excellent work.
Oh, Harry!!! Oh, I just want to hug him!!! I feel so, so bad for him!
| Title: Immune
| 04 Feb 2011 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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AWWWWWW that was such a cute ending to this chapter, cant wait for the next update... not that youve been making us, thanks!!!!
Great Chapter! I love your story so far. Very well written and the emotions practically scream at you. My heart just hurts for Harry.
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