Yay! I love good Draco and Harry relationships. This was great although it felt like you threw a lot of drama into a short story and I think it would flow a lot better if you turned it into a novel. Other than that and a very annoyingly cruel Lupin, your story was absolute genius and I'm so glad you wrote and posted it so thank you so much.
Lovely. Great job with Severus dealing with his old memories and two boys just starting out.
This sweet story needs a sequel... maybe a light-hearted tale a few years down the road, when Severus needs to deal with secure children who are inevitable mischief makers. *grin* Or a more serious one that deals with the looming return of Voldemort, but has a positive ending. Just how would book 5 go if Draco was on Harry's side instead of the Dark Lord's or Umbridge's? Hmmmm.
Anyway, I really liked this a lot, especially Severus' animagus form. :) BIG kitty! That would definitely be needed in any sequel you would write for this.
Well done!
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant! I found myself wishing there was more to the story.
Too short! This is a good beginning, but it's crying out for development into further adventures. Thanks for having written this, though--nicely done.
This is really good and I like it. I wish it was longer though.
Peace!
CheyRain
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| 06 Jul 2011 5:27 am
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| Reviewer: Sherry (Anonymous)
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Awww... I liked this - very nicely writ. It was so cute how Harry stuck to Draco and how Draco helped him. Loved Lupin's snark - too perfect. And Snape, of course... well, we all love Snape.
All in all, there are just so many things I love about this fic. Beautifully done. Simply a delightful read.
| Title: Of Ink and Parchment
| 04 Jul 2011 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Elena (Signed)
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WOW!!! That was amazing, why don't you write a sequel? I would surely read it!!!!
Elena
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