What a lovely story! I'm so glad that the three of them can be a family now, and from the beginning, too. I loved how close Draco and Harry were, and how protective Draco was.
This would make a wonderful beginning for a longer story, too! Great job!
| Title: Of Ink and Parchment
| 20 Feb 2011 11:30 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I thoroughly enjoyed that, especially the Remus/Snape conversation.
I like it. Awesome fic. :D
| Title: Of Ink and Parchment
| 20 Feb 2011 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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I really liked this! I loved the scene where Draco and Harry are trying to break into Sev's quarters and he's eavesdropping on their discussion. I'm still wondering exactly WHY the boys were so intent on getting in there... But I love the way that Snape changes throughout this story, from realizing that he has misjudged Harry, that the boy is abused, and then the way he finds out that he's actually Harry's godfather, and WHOA, he sets off into the snow to rescue his kid. Quite a departure from canon Snape, but very well done! *hands mug to Obsessive* Have some steaming hot chocolate!!!
Nice thought, but overall the plot was real jumpy. I couldn't tell what made Snape change his mind, what the kids were writing so futively on the parchments, what was a flashback and what wasn't. Feels like it was written in a hurry.
What a refreshing story! I love it love it love it! You did so great! 10+
| Title: Of Ink and Parchment
| 20 Feb 2011 8:37 am
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| Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous)
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Love this. Lily's letter was so sweet -- as well as a bit sad, sarcastic and overall -- forgiving.
I liked the chase scene, and Harry's little freakout at the end.
So...when's the sequel coming? :D
I loved it!
Remus was amazing! I love his new found sarcasm. You capture Snape wonderfully, his throwing cup in Remus's office was perfect.
Oh! ANd poor Harry! I felt so bad for him, but I'm glad he has SNape and Draco now. The ending was too cute! Snape's warming them up without a word was perfect!
Excellent story!
Awwww!That was very endearing and cute.
You had some amazingly humour-filled lines that had me laughing hysterically. I love the dynamics you have between Snape and Remus. They were very refreshing to see Remus be a bit more joking with him. Draco on the broom disobeying Snape was enjoyable. Wonderful story.
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