awww... this was so sweet. Great Job.
awww thank you! I love it! You mixed the humor and sadness very well! I was smiling the whole time :-) Glad to see that they are staying with Sev. You just made my day!
Great story; I loved your portrayal of Snape, who had all his canon prickiness and pettiness but was very loveable nevertheless due to his obvious emotional vulnerability. I also adored your depiction of Harry and Draco's relationship; it figures that the bossy, politically motivated little boy would take Harry under his wing then come to care for him- the pair's instinctive, innocent relationship reminded me of Hansel and Gretal ^^. The ideas of Lily's letter and the photograph were gorgeous; very vivid, raw and endearing. I loved Lupin and his line about the common courtesies that Severus had not cared to commit to memory was gorgeous.
A well written, brilliant story; I loved it.
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