| Title: Nothing But The Rain
| 24 Apr 2011 6:45 am
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| Reviewer: Rye (Signed)
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I think this is a good story, however, it would be nice to know more of how their relationships evolved, between Mark and Harry, and between them and Severus. Will you ever make a sequel, or a longer version of this? I specially enjoyed the last paragraph.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I wanted to leave some things up to the reader's imagination. I won't be making a sequel to this.
| Title: Nothing But The Rain
| 20 Feb 2011 9:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Nakago (Anonymous)
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Very nice beginning and classic Snape's reaction. I think you did a great job with this story.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Very interesting chapter; it's interesting how you've mirrored Mark and Harry's lives and I can see Harry going out of his way to help a younger, more vulnerable child. Snape's reaction is very typical- his prejudice against Harry makes him rather blind.
Lovely first chapter. Can't wait to see where you take this.
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