Title: What's Owed
| 20 Feb 2011 8:05 pm
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Reviewer: Grangerover (Anonymous)
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Did you know that there's another story on this site entitled "What's Owed"? At first, I thought this was that particular story until I clicked on it, lol.
Anyway, I didn't really care for this story. It was extremely cheesy. The ending was very rushed and entirely too fluffy: my teeth are aching from the overload of saccharinity. I would recommend taking more time in the future to craft a better, more believable and less mawkish finish.
Good luck with your future fics! :-)
Author's Response: I did not know there was another story with this title.
I won't be apologizing though. I do not think it is cheesy in the least, neither rushed or overly sweet. I took a great deal of time crafting this story, and think it is very believable. While I will thank you for the review, I will also say that if you're going to give criticism, make it constructive. Examples would go a long way in that regard, and a review like this does nothing whatsoever to make a writer a better one. I guess your review seemed more like a flame than constructive criticism. Thanks regardless.