Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Goodbye
Title: Goodbye 14 Oct 2012 4:08 pm
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww this is so sad! Such a good idea for a story :)
Title: Goodbye 26 Dec 2011 8:06 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    awww bittersweet

    Author's Response: Thanks :D
Title: Goodbye 12 Nov 2011 10:03 am
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s really sweet but your spelling and grammar is a bit…well a little bit more than a bit….off. I think this story would be great with a good read through by a Beta. Other than that really cute.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your comment!

     I would appreciate if you pointed out specific mistakes, so I can correct them and learn by the way :) In future I'll surely use an Beta... if I find someone. ;) 

Title: Goodbye 11 Jun 2011 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Jess4severus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked this a lot, poor Sev. His son is leaving :(
    I wonder if there will be a sequel.. Like when Harry marries or has kids of his own. Oh! I know, how about a fic where Snape is an old man and moves in with Harry; kinda like a reversal story.

    Author's Response:

    When someone in February gave me a review on this story, inquiring about the sequel as well, I said that I will think over it, but ever since I haven't thought about anything, so I can't exactly promise that I'll write anything. Anyway, your idea sounds like interesting one. Let me give it a thought, will you? :)

     Also, thanks for reviewing! 

Title: Goodbye 10 Mar 2011 7:28 am
Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like it.
    I wonder if this is how parents feel when kids move out.....
    It was well done.

    Author's Response:

    Well, I am not a parent myself yet, so I cannot tell. I thought a lot about this. Well, it was an interesting topic for the story... Anyway, when I become a parent, I'll read this story and respond you once again, huh? :) Just you would have to wait a bit, because I am young :P

    And thanks a lot for the review! 

Title: Goodbye 26 Feb 2011 3:51 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    "Parting is such sweet sorrow"-- I think Shakespeare said it best! Oh, a sadly-sweet departure from the security of his old life into the adventure of the future. You certainly captured the poignancy of the moment, with Harry looking ahead while Snape remembers the past. Very nicely done! :-)

    Author's Response: You've described it in a nice way as well, shadowienne. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: Goodbye 24 Feb 2011 4:38 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet, tender story, with very interesting flashbacks (though it might have been helpful to have the flashback in italics or otherwise labeled: it's easy to get lost if a scene jumps around in time,). I liked your portrayal of the characters and having Ron study Potions was a nice twist. Good work.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much! :)

    About the memories, I edited the story and now they are in italics. Thanks for pointing it out! 

Title: Goodbye 24 Feb 2011 10:26 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sweet but still alittle sad but all of us grow up and do this in time *S* very nice I loved how you wrote this... will there be a sequil?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much :)

    Regarding sequel... I intended to write only this one-shot, but I'll give it a thought, since I've not seen any fanfic with Harry studying at the university, which would not be Auror one :P I need to think a bit and maybe something will arise :) 

Title: Goodbye 24 Feb 2011 4:48 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, very sweet story Victoire.

    I feel bad that Severus is going to be alone, but glad that Harry and Snape have come so far.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review :)

    I felt bad for Severus when writing this story, too, but nothing fine can last forever. Hm, the good thing is that bad things also cannot last forever. 

Title: Goodbye 24 Feb 2011 4:28 am
Reviewer: Aeri21 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The story itself is really good. I would recommend some sort of divisor between sections because it got a little bit confusing.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review! :)

    I made memories in italics, hopefully it's now alright. 


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