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Title: Unexpected 12 Apr 2016 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good likeness to Severus. Loved the attitude!
Title: Unexpected 04 Jul 2013 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Librasmile (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay I'm sure you've been enlightened by now but I still have to comment. You DIDN'T know who Trent Reznor was? Holy moly? Let's just put it this way. If the Deatheaters ever wanted to commission a soundtrack, Trent would have written it. He is also known as the driving force for the "band" Nine Inch Nails. Yeah.
Title: Unexpected 21 Mar 2011 2:21 am
Reviewer: chey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    he is so hot
Title: Unexpected 07 Mar 2011 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the picture! It really does look like a young Snape.

    I had to laugh at Harry, trying to tell Snape not to touch Lily. And he really should have kept quiet and watched instead of introducing himself like that. He might have interfered with the time stream.

    Where will Harry go now?
Title: Unexpected 06 Mar 2011 8:30 pm
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. Well, wouldn't Harry be changing the past with his little "lily is my mom" thing? looking forward to read more!!

    Oh, and just to point something out. You're put Lily Potter instead of Evans when Harry's asking about his mum. And Severus didn't respond to the question so I;m guessing it's a typo?

    Author's Response:

    Oh good catch with the "Lily Potter" error.  I went back and changed it.  Thanks!

    As for 'changing the past' you'll see.  (Grins in secrecy).

Title: Unexpected 06 Mar 2011 7:11 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh. Harry's not very savy with his time travel. He may have just changed the future with a statement like that.
Title: Unexpected 06 Mar 2011 5:33 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm Harry's attitude while somewhat understanding at seeing his mother with someone other than who he thinks is his father, is also very...pretentious and self-righteous. Still he should have kept the mirror's words in mind but maybe that's just me. Either way, good chapter.

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