I like that you showed another side of James and Sirius that was only hinted at in the books when Harry peeked in Severus' penseive. They were bullies. I'm sure they did much worse. I am enjoying your story.
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| 12 Apr 2016 7:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you very good I like a little bashing of the right kind
LOL! Poor Harry. I imagine it was rather bewildering facing the two men he looks up to most, that way, so I really shouldn't laugh, but I'm such a fan of irony.
Nicely done.
I'm glad Harry saved Snape from James and Sirius. Father or godfather or not, what they were doing was wrong and Harry was right to step in and help. Harry would never condone bullying like that and I also like how you got round the whole Underage Use of Magic rule.
Very clever!
I also like how you described Snape's house and room, it sounds very realistic.
I like it so much! Definitely looking forward to more.
Oh I can't wait for the nxt chapter! update soon. By the way, someone else ( hint hint P&S) is goin to be Harry's true dad? Oh hurry up and finish the story!!!!!!
I'm looking forward to see how you pull all of this together. I enjoyed reading the first couple of chapters, and I don't think Harry has a clue who his real father is.
Now where did Harry go? Did the mirror take him somewhere else? Looking forward to reading more.
Considering what the books themselves revealed about Sirius and James when they were 15, this is very much in character for them. And I do see them being such. It's very interesting to see how Harry is begrudgingly opening his eyes though he is still in part in denial and operating on what he thinks he knows. Looking forward to the rest. Hope you update soon.
This is entertaining in a self discovery way. I like this younger Snape.
Your author note was entertaining at the end.
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