| Title: Agony of the Written Word
| 25 Oct 2013 5:09 pm
|
| Reviewer: crotia (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
| Title: Agony of the Written Word
| 23 Apr 2013 3:44 am
|
| Reviewer: Dragon (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Ever thought of finishing your story? It's very good. Totally worth it!
Oh, wow, good job with this! What a horrible woman!! And you've got her down pat!
Why haven't you continued this?
| Title: Agony of the Written Word
| 11 Aug 2011 1:33 am
|
| Reviewer: Alley (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Hope you continue this I would love to see how Snape helps out
Yikes... poor, silly fool, Harry. He's being rather stubborn about asking for help, isn't he.
Looking forward to Snape finding out, and seeing what he'll do.
misundersnape...
| Title: Agony of the Written Word
| 10 Jun 2011 7:27 pm
|
| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
Err... you said you would update soon. It has been, like, a few months. Come on!
| Title: Agony of the Written Word
| 09 May 2011 11:40 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Great beginning can't wait for the next chapter!!!
That sounds like gangrene, not a simple infection. Nasty. If you don't stop gangrene from spreading, you have to remove the limb, and if you don't do that in time, you'll lose the victim. I hope Harry gets some help soon.
That was fantastic! I greatly admire your description of the injury upon his hand, the detail of the puss and coloration - which, seems to strike me as the description of blood poisoning. I also love the way you portrayed Severus Snape. Every bit as vindictive as he was in the book. Umbridge too though, she seemed particularly foul here.
I am excited to see how the chaos will unfold, and the after-effects of the detention. Breathless, I wait for the next chapter.
--Alis Syn
|