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Title: Chapter 3 17 Apr 2011 2:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Sometimes you need to add html through the generator twice before they actually show up and work. Next time you see the html tags and they don't do what they're supposed to be doing in the preview, then preview again, or add them as is, and then add it again. As for the bold and italics that show up with a space... maybe you have some hidden tags for those in your coding and they get used and left open when you add the space. Look at the code and see next time it happens in the text box. Good luck!

    Author's Response:

    That could be it.

     I'm not adding the coding manually, I'm doing it in Wordpad and then copy+pasting it into the box. That might be the problem-maybe the formats aren't quite compatible? Meh.

     It's not that big a deal; I'll just keep previewing it to make sure it looks right before I post it.

     Thanks for your help!

Title: Chapter 3 15 Apr 2011 1:08 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!! UPDATE IT PUH-LEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Wow! I can almost SEE you bouncing in your chair. I love it!

    I've got another chapter uploaded, but I think it still has to be validated by the moderators. It should be showing soon.

    Thanks for the review, I love being able to feel my readers' reactions, and see your excitement!

Title: Chapter 3 14 Apr 2011 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Go Harry! Snape is very in character. Good job on that, and good job on all the descriptions.

    There wasn't any horrendous mistakes that I noticed. The writing looks good.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Surprisingly, Harry is harder to write for me than Snape is. Snape's dry, dark humor and razor-sharp insults are really close to how I normally speak (minus the English accent), so his words tend to flow for me, and I have more trouble keeping Harry in character.

    Every once in a while I'll notice a typo, but I try to edit those out as I find them since I can't stand waiting days or weeks for a beta to get back to me.

    I'm glad you're liking it thus far, I have lots more planned.

Title: Chapter 3 11 Apr 2011 12:43 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting four chapters I was dreading a de-aging story but this is a fun novel take thank you

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

     There are some really great de-aging stories out there, but I wanted to try something a little different. I've only read one story where Snape had a child post-War, and he was walking and talking, so hopefully this isn't glomming that idea too badly.

Title: Chapter 3 10 Apr 2011 11:29 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh very nice I hope to see more soon More please LOL

    Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. I've got another chapter uploaded, but it's not showing yet.
Title: Chapter 3 10 Apr 2011 6:37 am
Reviewer: lexie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey! this story is really good. :) i really like your writing style and the pace is great! poor snape, but i love how you've kept him in character. and i also like the baby, as weird as that sounds. unannounced children make for the best stories. :) please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :-)

     I'm already working on the next chapter, though I took a bit of a break to play with Photoshop for the title art.

     I should have the next chapter up in the next day or so.

Title: Chapter 3 09 Apr 2011 7:37 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    love how you've kept in character. still waiting to know who the babies mother is...

    Author's Response:

    I don't think the mother is going to play much of a part in the future.

    Basically, she's given him up for adoption, so to speak. She's underage, currently living in an orphanage, and given the circumstances of Ciaran's conception, she likely wants to push it to the back of her mind and go on with her life.

    It's possible that who she is may come out in the course of the story (it's not a major character, so it's really irrelevant), but I doubt very much she is going to be part of their lives.

    And that certainly doesn't make her a bad person; if anything, she's a victim, and she's entitled to do what she feels is best both for herself, and for the baby, which has already, thus far.

    So, while her identity may be mentioned, I don't think she'll be making an actual appearance down the line. Sorry to disappoint!

Title: Chapter 3 09 Apr 2011 5:13 am
Reviewer: Kumari-chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Honestly, I find I quite enjoyed this and can't wait for your next chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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