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Title: Chapter 4 18 Oct 2013 10:16 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying the story so far, but I do have one question-- if Harry's house is Unplottable and under the Fidelius Charm, how did the baby's mother find it in order to leave Ciaran on Harry's doorstep? Since Harry himself is the Secret-Keeper, does this mean he actually knows the mother, someone he would have told where the house was located? I wonder who she could be...
Title: Chapter 4 29 Jun 2011 5:58 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This isn't feeling rushed at all... so don't fret. As much as I am dying to see Sev's reaction to being introduced to his son I am enjoying the little details and twists along the way.
    "Bundle of joy... yeah that's it" Oh yes, you sound like you've done this before. I have five, so I know you have at least got a good grip on the first few weeks after bringing a new baby home. I always say: If they weren't cute, you'd EAT them! *looks at my 13 y/old... same, same... the sentiment still holds... :p
    "Yes, Mum" ...Say, Hermione, what do you know about babies?" Ah, brilliant, Harry is finally using his 'Slytherin' traits... Poor Hermione, never knows when to keep her big trap shut! Serves her right.
    Aw, but on the other hand, I can't wait to see her cuddling Severus' new born baby. I can't abide a HG/SS fic normally, but this sort of affiliation I like...
    Great job!
    Oh, and I like the Snape parts last chapter too. He's determinedly staying harsh to spare himself, I imagine. It'll be a harder fall when he does though, I suppose. Bless him.
    Thanks...
    misundersnape...
Title: Chapter 4 25 Apr 2011 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well I cna sympathise with Harry Babies do scream all day every day! I have the scars to prove it! Love this but hope we move on soon to some plot twists!
Title: Chapter 4 18 Apr 2011 4:56 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story so far. I wish I could fast forward past the stuff that must come in between and head straight to the "Snape Meets His Son" part. That's gonna be hard to wait for.

    Author's Response:

    I'm right there with you, to an extent.

    But, I plan to make the ride worth it. There's another chapter added, just awaiting validation, so it should be there within the next 24 hours to (hopefully) really catch everyone off-guard.

Title: Chapter 4 18 Apr 2011 2:26 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh sounds awesome!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I should have more up in a few days.
Title: Chapter 4 17 Apr 2011 9:25 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe that last line will certainly throw Hermione LOL. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're liking it!
Title: Chapter 4 17 Apr 2011 4:44 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it so far! Can't wait to see how Snape will react when he finds out. I like Harry being a bit reclusive, and I can see why he didn't seek help even when left with a new-born baby. He's just used to doing things on his own.
    Very good story, please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Glad you're enjoying it!

    At this point even I'M not sure how Snape will react (which is a bit scary, actually), so I suppose we'll find out together. Lol.

    And yes, Harry's history with the Dursleys does play a large part of his little foibles with regard to trusting others with problems, but so does his history with the Wizarding world, as people have proven to be a bit wishy-washy with regard to anything concerning Harry in the past. Even Ron and Hermione had their "off" moments with regard to taking Harry at his word and not suspecting him of having some kind of nefarious (or in Hermione's case, maybe just foolish and rule-breaking) intentions.

    Coupled with a year on the run and finding out just how many people really were in Voldemort's pockets (metaphorically speaking) certainly hasn't made Harry any more trusting or prone to ask for help before at least ATTEMPTING to do things on his own first.

    I think that's going to be a major struggle for him throughout the story, and upcoming events aren't going to help. And that's all I can say without starting to spoil it. *zips lips*

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 4 17 Apr 2011 2:16 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha. Love it! And who is going to notice the baby first? Maybe Hermione. Or Rita? Thanks for the update! it was short, but entertaining. Wish there would have been more to read.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    There should be a new chapter in the next couple of days. This one actually snuck up on me; I'd planned something else but the trip to Diagon Alley happened first.

Title: Chapter 4 16 Apr 2011 9:34 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Hermione's going to have a cow. *cackles*

    Author's Response: Given her usual attitude towards rules and legality, I'm thinking she's going to have a whole HERD of cattle. Glad you're enjoying it!

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