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Reviews For Cradle and All
Author's Response: Thanks! There should be a new chapter in the next couple of days. This one actually snuck up on me; I'd planned something else but the trip to Diagon Alley happened first.
Author's Response: That could be it. I'm not adding the coding manually, I'm doing it in Wordpad and then copy+pasting it into the box. That might be the problem-maybe the formats aren't quite compatible? Meh. It's not that big a deal; I'll just keep previewing it to make sure it looks right before I post it. Thanks for your help!
Author's Response: Given her usual attitude towards rules and legality, I'm thinking she's going to have a whole HERD of cattle. Glad you're enjoying it!
Author's Response: Wow! I can almost SEE you bouncing in your chair. I love it! I've got another chapter uploaded, but I think it still has to be validated by the moderators. It should be showing soon. Thanks for the review, I love being able to feel my readers' reactions, and see your excitement!
There wasn't any horrendous mistakes that I noticed. The writing looks good. Author's Response: Thank you! Surprisingly, Harry is harder to write for me than Snape is. Snape's dry, dark humor and razor-sharp insults are really close to how I normally speak (minus the English accent), so his words tend to flow for me, and I have more trouble keeping Harry in character. Every once in a while I'll notice a typo, but I try to edit those out as I find them since I can't stand waiting days or weeks for a beta to get back to me. I'm glad you're liking it thus far, I have lots more planned.
I edited the formatting for you to have the letter blocked. The code is using html and blockquote to begin and /blockquote to end. As long as you have the text as a blockquote in your word processor it may transfer over to keep that tag in the published chapter. Let me know if you need more help! :) Author's Response: Thanks, Jan! I tried that, but for some reason the end <*/blockquote> remained visible in the preview, so I just took it back out thinking there must be some secret code for the site I wasn't privy to. I'm still not sure why it did that, since I apparently had the code right, or why it tends to bold and underline the entire chapter if I so much as add a space to something I've pasted in the box, but I assume it's some quirk that just likes to mess with me a bit, nothing devastating. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. There are some really great de-aging stories out there, but I wanted to try something a little different. I've only read one story where Snape had a child post-War, and he was walking and talking, so hopefully this isn't glomming that idea too badly.
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. I've got another chapter uploaded, but it's not showing yet. |
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