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Title: Chapter 4 17 Apr 2011 2:16 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha. Love it! And who is going to notice the baby first? Maybe Hermione. Or Rita? Thanks for the update! it was short, but entertaining. Wish there would have been more to read.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    There should be a new chapter in the next couple of days. This one actually snuck up on me; I'd planned something else but the trip to Diagon Alley happened first.

Title: Chapter 3 17 Apr 2011 2:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Sometimes you need to add html through the generator twice before they actually show up and work. Next time you see the html tags and they don't do what they're supposed to be doing in the preview, then preview again, or add them as is, and then add it again. As for the bold and italics that show up with a space... maybe you have some hidden tags for those in your coding and they get used and left open when you add the space. Look at the code and see next time it happens in the text box. Good luck!

    Author's Response:

    That could be it.

     I'm not adding the coding manually, I'm doing it in Wordpad and then copy+pasting it into the box. That might be the problem-maybe the formats aren't quite compatible? Meh.

     It's not that big a deal; I'll just keep previewing it to make sure it looks right before I post it.

     Thanks for your help!

Title: Chapter 4 16 Apr 2011 9:34 pm
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Hermione's going to have a cow. *cackles*

    Author's Response: Given her usual attitude towards rules and legality, I'm thinking she's going to have a whole HERD of cattle. Glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 3 15 Apr 2011 1:08 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!! UPDATE IT PUH-LEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Wow! I can almost SEE you bouncing in your chair. I love it!

    I've got another chapter uploaded, but I think it still has to be validated by the moderators. It should be showing soon.

    Thanks for the review, I love being able to feel my readers' reactions, and see your excitement!

Title: Chapter 3 14 Apr 2011 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Go Harry! Snape is very in character. Good job on that, and good job on all the descriptions.

    There wasn't any horrendous mistakes that I noticed. The writing looks good.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Surprisingly, Harry is harder to write for me than Snape is. Snape's dry, dark humor and razor-sharp insults are really close to how I normally speak (minus the English accent), so his words tend to flow for me, and I have more trouble keeping Harry in character.

    Every once in a while I'll notice a typo, but I try to edit those out as I find them since I can't stand waiting days or weeks for a beta to get back to me.

    I'm glad you're liking it thus far, I have lots more planned.

Title: Chapter 2 14 Apr 2011 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter.

    I edited the formatting for you to have the letter blocked. The code is using html and blockquote to begin and /blockquote to end. As long as you have the text as a blockquote in your word processor it may transfer over to keep that tag in the published chapter.

    Let me know if you need more help! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Jan!

    I tried that, but for some reason the end <*/blockquote> remained visible in the preview, so I just took it back out thinking there must be some secret code for the site I wasn't privy to.

     I'm still not sure why it did that, since I apparently had the code right, or why it tends to bold and underline the entire chapter if I so much as add a space to something I've pasted in the box, but I assume it's some quirk that just likes to mess with me a bit, nothing devastating. :-)

Title: Chapter 1 14 Apr 2011 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, yay! A baby! I wonder who it is and how it got there. Nice character background and development of Harry. His vocabulary seems very advanced for being in his thoughts. I suppose that he developed that too at some point, unless I am mistaken and he had such a vocabulary in the last books. It's been awhile since I read them.
Title: Prologue 14 Apr 2011 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice start. I like seeing this from Kingsley's point of view. An unusual villian.
Title: Chapter 3 11 Apr 2011 12:43 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting four chapters I was dreading a de-aging story but this is a fun novel take thank you

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

     There are some really great de-aging stories out there, but I wanted to try something a little different. I've only read one story where Snape had a child post-War, and he was walking and talking, so hopefully this isn't glomming that idea too badly.

Title: Chapter 3 10 Apr 2011 11:29 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh very nice I hope to see more soon More please LOL

    Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. I've got another chapter uploaded, but it's not showing yet.

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