Well, that was dramatic. *phew*
Oddly, I was smiling like a maniac throughout the chapter. Maybe he will have hearing problem? Or paralysis due to brain Haemorrhage? A really nice twist to the usual stories.You can add the challenge 'Snape Rage'. This story meets the requirements.
Woooooow!!! What a mess! It didn't seem in character that Snape would hurt harry like that, but if he was having some sort of mental problem or was cursed and thought it was James... and a fair fight. That makes more sense. What a mess!!!
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| 11 Apr 2011 12:22 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow a very dramatic start to a story thank you
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| 10 Apr 2011 5:11 am
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| Reviewer: Kellie (Anonymous)
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This seems wonderfully interesting:P Please continue.
Oh this could turn out very intresting. I've always liked fics that dared explore a dark reaction to the pensive scene. You got my support thus far, please continue.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Apr 2011 12:04 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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OH my god Poor Harry Sev finally cracked can they work togewther after this I do not think harry would trust him... More please thank you.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Apr 2011 3:02 am
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| Reviewer: Shira (Anonymous)
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Whooow... Snape really lost it .___. Poor Harry, I am really curious how Severus wants to fix this 'little' mishap. And how will the others react? Will Snape be fired, since he almost killed a student?
>__< wahh i am curious!!
Please update soon :D
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Apr 2011 2:01 am
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| Reviewer: Courtney (Anonymous)
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So good! I don't think there is a story you've written that I haven't enjoyed!
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