Silence is cleverly written. I liked how you gave the reader some insight about her and how her mind works. It's very intriguing:) :)
Off for more!!
Wow, this chapter was intense.
| Title: Of Lies and Deflections
| 12 Jul 2011 6:18 am
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| Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous)
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I really like this. Are you going to turn this into a Severitus fic? I find it interesting that most Girl!Harry fics pair one of the twins with her.
| Title: Of Lies and Deflections
| 28 Jun 2011 2:07 am
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| Reviewer: Malachai (Anonymous)
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Oooo. Me Likey.
The highest compliment I can give is that this is very 'Butterfly Effect-esque,' meaning that your femHarry is a non-Sue and relatively interesting.
I do wish there was some backstory though.
| Title: Of Lies and Deflections
| 17 Jun 2011 7:33 am
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| Reviewer: Katherine (Anonymous)
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Wow, that's deep.
Why doesn't anybody notice she's falling apart at the seems?
I feel so sorry for her, and, I just want to take her home with me and make sure she learns the truth that people love her, and she's special, worth something, not a freak.
| Title: Of Lies and Deflections
| 17 Jun 2011 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow you know how to pile on the agony. I'm glad we had two encounters with others to lighten the intensity of it all!
| Title: Of Lies and Deflections
| 16 Jun 2011 6:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Tabitha (Anonymous)
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That's a lot to take in. Wow, that's a really hard thing to think about....she's gunna drown in her thinking soon....
I really like it, it's very different to any others of read and I can't wait to see how it develops. Well done :)
| Title: Of Lies and Deflections
| 16 Jun 2011 12:38 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh poor girl! I think she need to be discovered. more please!
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