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Title: Later 28 May 2020 8:02 pm
Reviewer: overlyenthused (Signed) [Report This]
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Title: Later 17 May 2014 1:10 am
Reviewer: angelique (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, a lot of emotions in this chapter, I really like your portrayal of Snape and his inner thoughts,self-doubt and tremor, and so on, now that he has the full responsiblity of a young child... I really like the idea of Harry as Snape's apprentice, and it was fascinating to read about the ritual... I would love to see and sequel to this story, in order to see how their life turns out as master and apprentice... I love your Harry and Snape, and the alternate universe you created in this story! The climax and top moment in this chapter was their conversation about Lily and the end, Harry delivering Lily's greeting from beyond the veil... wow, that was powerful!
Title: Later 15 Aug 2012 6:30 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Well...even though I should gave been doing other things today, you had me totally hooked from the opening sentence.
    Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story.
Title: Later 18 Jul 2011 9:15 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Please do post Draco's Birthday Party! Either as an epilogue to this tale or as a separate one-shot; it would be great!

    I really enjoyed reading this story. The premise of Voldie having lodged himself in Harry instead of fleeing to Albania was a very unique and interesting plot twist, and I think you handled it very well. My favorite bit was when Harry was dead. I thought how you had him take care of baby Tom was sweet, and, really what should have been done in canon... Oh, I'd better not get started on my rant about the mistakes that Dumbledore made when he met Tom Riddle for the first time. Sorry about that!

    I found the story very, very satisfying, and I felt that you did a great job in keeping Snape in character despite the differences in the events he was experiencing from canon. (And I loved Marlowe!)

    Well done!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much for your thoughts! I'm glad you liked the premise of Harry being possessed - I was very impressed by the scene in OOTP when Voldemort acted through Harry, and I thought it would be even creepier to see him do it when Harry was still a little boy (Regan from "The Exorcist" comes to mind...). As for Tom Riddle, I have to say I agree that Dumbledore could have handled things differently, but then, this may have been how things were done at that time and age, when being an orphan still carried something of a stigma... anyway, I'm glad you liked the story, thank you for letting me know!

Title: Later 18 Jul 2011 9:13 pm
Reviewer: ForgottenEllipses (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I would love to see Draco's party! I think the opportunity for interactions between Harry and Lucius would be excellent, and potentially you could add Severus into the mix as Harry's escort. Or not, it might be interesting with him not there as well.

    I think, though, that would best be placed under a different story title, as an extra scene, rather than an epilogue, unless you add other scenes or something that is very important to this particular storyline. Otherwise it will just seem like it's left hanging...

    Hoping for more to come!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I thought about posting the birthday party under a different title, but since it's so closely tied into the story, I decided on an epilogue instead. I hope I managed to wrap things up without forgetting any plot lines. Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Later 18 Jul 2011 9:08 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course I'd love to read another chapter/epilogue/whatever. I have certainly loved reading this story and would have chimed in on Harry's supposed death, but I was on vacation and just got caught up. Cheers!

    Author's Response: Hope you had a great vacation! I'm glad you liked the story, thank you very much for your reviews!
Title: Later 18 Jul 2011 1:54 am
Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    Just now had a chance to read your story - read it straight through ... LOVED IT!!!!! Hope you have a sequal in store if you plan to end this in the next chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! About the sequel - I might have some ideas, but I'll need to let a little time pass and write something else in the meantime. Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Later 17 Jul 2011 12:01 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    im most certainly interested in a epilogue! thank you so much for this wonderful story and i really enjoyed reading it from the beginning to the end! update soon i really wanna read all abt Draco's party :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your reviews - I hope you like Draco's party!
Title: Later 17 Jul 2011 10:47 am
Reviewer: Shadowdog85 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Great story. I really would love to read about Harry's trip to Malfoy Manor, it wouldn't seem complete without it.
    Thank you for writing this story, it was a pleasure to read.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, and I hope you'll like Harry's stay at the Malfoys'! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Title: Later 17 Jul 2011 7:04 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    *laughs* Sev, no matter what you call it, its still parenting. Admit it, accept it, deal with it. I love that Marlowe made another appear in this chapter. I've grown fond of that kneazle and I'm interested to see how he plays into the story.

    Now back to the topic of Sev's parenting... I really hope you do show them going to Madam Malkins and the optician. I'm interested to see if Harry's eye sight is naturally that bad in your world or was made worse or that bad from the neglect and abuse. I also love it when people write about Harry getting new clothes, because everyone writes it so differently, but so essentially Harry either way.

    here's looking to seeing more!

    Author's Response:

    You're giving me some great ideas for what might be included in a possible sequel - I also love stories in which a new guardian takes care of Harry and provides him with all the things he's never had.

    Thank you very much for reviewing!


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