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Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 24 Jun 2011 2:19 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    Weird...a kinship potion? I'm sorry but with Snape I would to think (after he raged a bit) that he would immeidately think of a paternity potion, instead of just a kinship. Still I am very happy that you continued on with this story! I hope you update really soon!

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes he thought of the 'paternity potion', as did DD mention it (obliquely), but the thing with that potion, as is hinted at, is that it is rather traumatic and a long process to make it, both for the brewer and both subjects, so it's a last resort option.  'Kinship' is a quick, practically immediate method to determine if further investigation is even needed, such as the 'parternity potion' down the track.  So I think he's being a top rate Potions Master here and methodically working out the problem.  He just got a little caught up in the results and the shock for a moment, that's all.  He's only human after all. ;)

    Thanks for your review!  I'm working on the next, it's coming together...

    misundersnape...

Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 22 Jun 2011 9:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the part where Severus looks for kinship in Harry's face. They are both so lonely and need each other! Very good writing thank ou
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 20 Jun 2011 5:58 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    I suppose the muggle method of ascertaining paternity wouldn't work with wizards? Or have they just not thought of that yet? I love how you portrayed Severus' reaction to their kinship. Very telling for the normally reserved wizard.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 2:50 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    lol wow that was great nore pleasse thank you.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 2:07 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I reviewed over at ffnet, but the chappie was so good that I thought that it merited another review over here! :)

    You just had to torture us by making the test inconclusive, didn't you!!! :O I hope that Harry gets his most secret desire, and Snape too.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 11:45 am
Reviewer: LilySev777 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great! I'm hoping for more soon.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 5:23 am
Reviewer: darklight1601 (Signed) [Report This]
    While I can understand being bad at estimating how long something will take to complete (I find I have the same problem), I now feel like I'm waiting on pins and needles to read the ending, something quite rare for me. Congrats to you for making me this way. I love this so far. It's just the right length and has just enough description to make a good short story, without feeling like it's dragging on or leaving something out; and I especially loved this chapter for Snape's reaction. I truly think you wrote it brilliantly, couldn't possibly be any better.

    Hope you post the next chapter soon. I have an idea how it might end, but then there are actually quite a few possibilities. I can't wait to find out.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 3:48 am
Reviewer: NightPhoenix69 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope this goes on for many chapters! Long, long chapters! Love It!
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 2:18 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. Glad it's continuing.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 18 Jun 2011 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    ACK. I knew the cliffie was coming, but still... I wanna knooow!

    Awesome chappie. I anticipate the next. ^^

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