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Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 2:07 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I reviewed over at ffnet, but the chappie was so good that I thought that it merited another review over here! :)

    You just had to torture us by making the test inconclusive, didn't you!!! :O I hope that Harry gets his most secret desire, and Snape too.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 11:45 am
Reviewer: LilySev777 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great! I'm hoping for more soon.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 5:23 am
Reviewer: darklight1601 (Signed) [Report This]
    While I can understand being bad at estimating how long something will take to complete (I find I have the same problem), I now feel like I'm waiting on pins and needles to read the ending, something quite rare for me. Congrats to you for making me this way. I love this so far. It's just the right length and has just enough description to make a good short story, without feeling like it's dragging on or leaving something out; and I especially loved this chapter for Snape's reaction. I truly think you wrote it brilliantly, couldn't possibly be any better.

    Hope you post the next chapter soon. I have an idea how it might end, but then there are actually quite a few possibilities. I can't wait to find out.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 3:48 am
Reviewer: NightPhoenix69 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope this goes on for many chapters! Long, long chapters! Love It!
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 19 Jun 2011 2:18 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. Glad it's continuing.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 18 Jun 2011 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    ACK. I knew the cliffie was coming, but still... I wanna knooow!

    Awesome chappie. I anticipate the next. ^^
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 18 Jun 2011 8:19 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ugh I must wait for one more chapter to find out...how cruel.....but what a great chapter. Loved the part of Severus searching Harry's face for signs of him. Wouldn't it be funny if Severus found out that he was actually his hated enemy's secret brother...Looking forward to reading your next chapter.
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 18 Jun 2011 7:59 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fascinating idea - that the potion can tell if they are related, but not if Snape is the father. I like having that element of partly knowing, but not knowing about paternity, so that they both have to consider "what ifs".
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 18 Jun 2011 6:50 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    this ws really well-written! im really enjoying it so far plz plz update!
Title: Chapter 4 - You Knew, Hedwig? 18 Jun 2011 5:27 pm
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    ARGH! another chapter? Now i'm torn between hating you and loving you.

    Awesome chaptera281;a281;a281; The suspense nearly tore me apart! Oh, I hope everything comes to light soon... The way Snape had searched for his features on Harry's face is a bit astonishing, though. it doesn't really seem like him, but it's a nice touch. i loved it. =)

    Update soon, yeah? Please please please!

    Author's Response:

    "The way Snape had searched for his features on Harry's face is a bit astonishing, though. it doesn't really seem like him"

    I put that down to the utter shock he had discovering that he 'was' related to Potter, and that that relationship was looking like it might be Father/Son.  He was utterly stunned and then suddenly in a panic to see the 'evidence' for himself in the boy's features.  It's not really him, not the normal him, you're right, but I liked the idea of him getting so caught up in it and showing his more tender side.  Glad you liked it ultimately.

     Thanks for your review!

    Ah, face it - ya love me! :D

    misundersnape...


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