| Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig?
| 05 Jun 2011 6:25 am
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Another great chapter! I think you're doing a good job interpreting the characters. I can imagine them reacting in exactly this way. Looking forward to more!
| Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig?
| 05 Jun 2011 6:23 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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This was great! I eagerly await the next installment. I hope that Severus is Harry's father. However, I am sure that I will love whatever you decide to do. Shouldn't you have said "seen" instead of "sighted" in "...he hadn’t ever sighted a Marriage Certificate after all"?
| Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig?
| 05 Jun 2011 6:07 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Thanks for continuing this! I love seeing them both learn about their relationship at the same time, practically out of the blue. Great story.
| Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig?
| 05 Jun 2011 5:27 am
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| Reviewer: TATIS (Signed)
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HAS MADE ME MOURN.
Dumblendore defended Harry!
amazing
| Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig?
| 05 Jun 2011 5:27 am
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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Oh this was so good. Love how Dumbledore followed Snape and made sure to be with them both during the talk. Love Harry's reaction to Snape's questions. Looking forward to the next chapter
| Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig?
| 05 Jun 2011 5:08 am
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| Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed)
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oohhhh wat an awful place to stop!!! i hv to tell u that u must update soon or u will hv a revolt on ur hands b/c im sure im not the only reader that's disappointed that it ended there! i do sincerely hope that it's more than 3 chapters im sure that ur story is really popular and pple will want to read more and more :) i can say that im one of the pple nyways i really hope that u update soon b/c im dying to no wat happens nxt!!
| Title: Chapter 2 - Did You Deliver My Letter To My Father, Hedwig?
| 05 Jun 2011 4:18 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh my God. How can you end it like that? Please update soon! I'm on pins and needles to know what's going to happen.
So glad that you've decided to continue with this.
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 05 Jun 2011 2:18 am
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| Reviewer: LaPapillonne (Anonymous)
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omg yes, please continue! I'm dying to see what happens in the office
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 04 Jun 2011 6:17 am
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| Reviewer: blu (Anonymous)
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pleaasseeee continueee!! me begss!!
| Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 04 Jun 2011 4:38 am
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| Reviewer: Reverie (Anonymous)
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Definitely needing a Sequel!!
I'd like to know how both Harry and Sev would react, and the whole school and the wizarding world.. hehe.. nice story!!
Love it!!!
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