That was...amazing. It had the right amount of suspense AND humour. I especially loved Arthur's "You never get used to it."
Great job and I'll be praying for your brother.
Thanks for the update! And what a wonderful closing line! (how true!)
V.
Loved the chapter!! Hope to get to read more soon!
I do believe Severus is never letting his son out of his sight again. I cannot wait to see if he manages it!
| Title: He Should Have Been a Slytherin
| 28 Feb 2012 11:37 pm
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So sorry about your troubles I hope that things will be better soon. Thank you for a great story with wonderful chracters
| Title: He Should Have Been a Slytherin
| 26 Feb 2012 8:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Testa204 (Signed)
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Only a Gryffindor would have the nerve to Accio something from Snape...lol thanks for the smiles with this chapter!
(((hugs))) for you with regards to your brother.
| Title: He Will Have Powers the Dark Lord Knows Not (Part Two)
| 26 Feb 2012 8:32 pm
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Loved this chapter... From the way you told (and thought of) removing the mark from Severus, to the amusing interactions with Poppy to the emotional outburst with Dumbledore at the end... Excellent work!
I'm in love with your Severus. I wanted you to know that before I said anything else.
Next, I totally dig that you have Harry blackmailing Severus. It's amusing to no end, which brings up another question. Refresh my memory, did Harry tell Sev what a certain hat told him?
*grins*
Great chapter!
This was an amazing chapter, Harry's been a brave boy, just like your brother I'm sure. We'll all pray for him.
Please don't even worry about the chapters, you've been doing a phenomenal job so far. I wish you and your family the best of luck and hope.
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